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« on: February 19, 2007, 05:34:27 AM »
Hello there peoples. As and suggested and requested from some fellow readers, I decided to remake this fanfic into a better, more improved and organized one to have a better plotline. =] Also...since it was awarded "Best Fanfic of 2006" by Mr. Chaedogg," my inspiration and confidence in this story flamed back. This fanfic is also posted on Soompi.

Most characters will stay the same, some will be left out. Some chapters and events in the original will also be left out or put into a different order. For old readers, suspension for next chapter will occur, but since you read it. Don't predict. <.< Hehe.

Well..enough said. Hope you enjoy this...again!


Lost in the Rain-The Remake-[/color][/b]



Prologue[/i]
Footsteps, her footsteps splattered
Puddles, the puddles parted their way for them
Pausing, she looked down at the parted path
Seeing, seeing herself stomp on her reflection

Handle the past, she can't and shalt
Find the solution, refusal and regret
Easing the pain, she laid out her palm
Calling out to the rain, she sang

Droplets of water dances for her delight
Showering herself into another world
Forgetting, leaving the embedded pain
Smiling for her watery friends

Wet, wetness a factor she can't feel
Happiness, replaced again with the pain
Pondering, looking up at the peeking sun
Why herself was still lost in the rain


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« Reply #1 on: February 21, 2007, 05:34:13 AM »
Chapter o1.
Dripping wet and damp, I stepped through the front door. My feet slipped out form the sandals into my fuzzy Sponge Bob slippers.

“MiHyun, dear is that you?” Umma called form the kitchen. I tried drying myself, before meeting her.

“ Nae, Umma. I’m sorry I was still star gazing until it rained.” I gave her a sheepish smile, and she just nodded. She began to prepare some rice and leftover beef for me. I ran upstairs, changing out of these clothes before eating.

“Nuna! Yay! You’re here!” Yunho, my brother, snuck up to me.

“Hehe, yes I’m home. I missed you too.” Sticking out my tongue and giggling at him, I lifted him up and swirled him into the air in the bathroom. He tried punching my shoulders, giggling still.

“Silly Nuna! I didn’t even tell you I missed you!” I finally put him down. He hugged my legs; that’s as far as he can reach.

My brother, YunHo, is 8 years old this year. He’s really small and puny for his age. The doctor says he’s underweight, so he used that excuse to eat more candy and junk food. My name is MiHyun Kim, age 15 this year and attends SanGo High School. I live with my mom and my dearest brother, my dad passed a year ago.

Gazing at him, I noticed his hair. It was gelled and spiked up…at 10ish…at night…?

“YunHo ah, why did you make your hair now? At night?” I took the blow dryer and began drying my hair. YunHo stood on the toilet seat trying to be as tall as me.

“I did it so I won’t have to wake up early in the morning and I can sleep in before school!” He smiled innocently. That kid…

“MiHyun ah! You’re food is getting cold!” Umma called. I helped YunHo down to the ground and took the blow dryer, aiming it at his face. Hehe. I ran off downstairs quickly, leaving him with a pouting face.

I sat down and ate my late meal. Umma sat next to me, reading the newspaper. “What did you do to YunHo,” she paused,” this time?” She laughed, hearing him whine and pout upstairs.

“Oh, nothing. Just teaching him about time management involving hair.” I left my dishes in the sink.

I gave her a goodnight kiss on the cheek and left to go brush my teeth and tuck in YunHo.
When I was done brushing my teeth, I found YunHo sleeping soundly in his bedroom. I tired stroking his hair but it didn’t work. I decided to do some chatting today…

I only found my best friend, JiHyun online. She likes to stay up talking to her large range of guy friends.


Personally, I don't know a lot of her friends. She has connections everywhere.

In the chat room…

Whoa…do “boys” who talk that gentleman-like even exist? Who the heck talks like that? Andy sure knows his manners. No one has ever talked to me like that before.

So I complemented him. We kept talking for a bit when Andy invited me to go to Brian's invitation only party next Saturday. I accepted of course. It was getting late, so I asked them to leave first to go to bed, like the “goody-goody” that I am. Well…I try to be. I went to sleep, having the last thought I remember was Andy and the party.

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I had fun screenshotting and making up new screen names for AIM. Hehe. =]
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« Reply #2 on: February 21, 2007, 09:55:37 PM »
hmm interesting

wat u mean predict... u, selinah, and angela haven't posted in so long... i'd have to reread the entire story just to predict =[
already forgot everything XD

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« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2007, 11:29:04 PM »
Chapter o2

I drowsily woke up with YunHo up in my face. His eyes were looking straight at me, his fingers poking my cheeks. For a dongseng who wakes up earlier than his nuna…scary wouldn’t you think so? He’s my alarm clock since he transferred to a private all boys’ Christian school. YunHo’s class starts at 10AM, but he likes waking me up and then having me watch cartoons with him. Unless I missed the bus, like today…



“NUNAAAAAAAAA! WAKE UP! NUNNNA,” he poked me some more, “YOU LOOK UGLY WHEN YOU SLEEP! THE BUS LEFT ALREADY! GET UP GET UP! UMMAAAAAAAAAAAAA, NUNA KIMMI WON’T WAKE UP!” Yunnie practically yelled in my ear.

“Hey, I’m up…”I mumbled. He smiled happily and got off my tummy.

 I took a 4 minute shower, the kind you take at school where the showers are timed, and put on my uniform. My hair was still wet and put in a sloppy ponytail. I got my lunch and was about to head out the door.

 As I opened it…I saw JiHyun coming this way also. We walked to school together, well…we skipped, ran, then walked again. SanGo High School isn’t that far from our street, actually. JiHyun likes to take the bus to spend some time with her boyfriend, JongMin.

We skipped to school, seeing some people throwing their cancer sticks (cigarettes) onto the floor before running to class. I forgot my watch!

“JiHyun ah, we better hurry!” I grabbed her by the wrist and we skipped to our classes. The schedules were mailed in, Ji and I have different fist hours.

 
*Bring Bring*

“Saved by the bell, Miss Kim?” Mr. Kwon teased as I stepped in. I bowed then took my seat which was near the back of the room.

Today, there was this guy sitting in front of me. He had a really big head.
Mr. Kwon was explaining a math problem, but I couldn’t see it at all.

“Um…excuse me? Can you move your head? I can’t see the math problem.” I whispered as I tapped his shoulder.

He turned around. He looked really hot.

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« Reply #4 on: February 27, 2007, 04:31:21 AM »
i have no meaningful comment at this time...

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« Reply #5 on: March 06, 2007, 09:49:31 PM »
Chapter o3

He turned around. He looked really hot.

“Sorry, my bad.”

He smiled at move, moving his seat over to the side more so I could see the board. I frantically copied down the math problem in my notebook, burying my head into solving it. What can I say, I like math.

"Hey,” the guy tapped me on the shoulder, making me look up,” do you understand the math problem, I didn’t get what Mr. Kwon was saying.” He gave me another one of his smiles.

I lifted up my head and smiled shyly back at him. “Yeah, it’s pretty simple all you have to do is …” I was about to explain to him how to solve it when Mr. Kwon yelled out, “Miss Kim, is there something so important you would like to share with the class?”

Being the good student that I am, I started to sit up straight, folding my hands and looked straight into Mr. Kwon’s eyes before responding to him. “No sir, this ...guy asked me to explain the math problem for him since he didn’t seem to understand your lesson.” I smiled sweetly. Gets the teachers every time…


"Well, in that case, why don't you do the honor and explain it to the whole class?" Mr. Kwon said giving a doubtful look.

I gave him another smile, I stood up and bowed. I went all the way in front of the class. I could feel my cheeks reddening too. I looked back at Mr. Kwon, who was now standing beside my desk. I then looked over to the new guy. He gave me an assuring look. I don't recall his name, but he seemed to know me.....

--

Soon enough, math was over. We had a break between classes, since the next teacher seemed to be coming a little later. I saw Ji Hyun come running in to find me, so we would walk to the next class together. She was about to give me a guy when the new guy came flying across the room, picked her up and swung her around.

“Yah, Oppa put me down!” She giggled smiling at him. Who are you, Mr. New Guy?

He finally put her down and hugged her, before letting her wonder off to me. I gave her a questioning look, but she slyly returned it with an innocent smile. That girl.

"Hey, you know the new guy?" I asked Ji wondering. Why does she call him oppa? JongMin was her boyfriend…right?

"Oopies! This is my cousin, YunMin. Remember how I told you my cousin is going to transfer here? Well this is him!" She tugged on his arm, pulling him closer to us.

“Um, hi.” He quietly said, fixing his gaze elsewhere.

“Hello again.” I playfully said, laughing inside.

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« Reply #6 on: March 07, 2007, 03:32:03 AM »
lol

^ if it was 1 of the kids in my class he wouldn't care if he had to teach in front of the whole class stupid arrogant r tard XD

i still dont remember much of this story :roll:

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« Reply #7 on: March 09, 2007, 02:16:26 AM »
Chapter o4.

Days passed by and I still managed to see Linah getting very friendly with YunMin. She was the new transfer student from Australia. It’s quite funny listening to her speak with her accent. Somehow, with her appealing beauty, she had already managed to win the interest of YunMin Though it may be hard to not be possessive since I don’t even own him, but…I can at least hate her, right? .

 I walked down the noisy hallways of my school towards my lockers. Waiting near my locker was no one other than…Andy?

“Hey, Andy. What are you doing here?” I asked, surprised.

“Just wanted to know if you are ready to the party tomorrow.” He smiled at me, leaning to the side so I was able to open my locker.

I forgot about the party…all week I was thinking about YunMin. “Huh? Oh, yeah…the party. I mumbled softly. I smiled at him and nodded, saying I was all prepared for it. It wasn’t a lie, more like…an exaggerated fib[/b] I will be prepared for it…by tonight. Hehe.

“Well, okay then. I’ll see you there. Laters, MiHyun!” Andy’s teeth gleamed and gave me a hug.

I watched as he left. I gathered my books and then left as well. While walking out the school gates, I noticed YunMin was leaning absently against a tree. I tried to ignore him and pass him. It didn’t work too well as expected. He grabbed my arm as I tried walking faster and almost tripped on…gravel.

“Are you alright?” He still had a hold of my arm. I liked the feeling of his firm grip on my arm. Even so, I tried acting as natural as possible. To complete the act, I did this…

“What do you want? Can you let go of me, YunMin?” I glared at him. Or tried to. Keep the up, I told myself.

I guess the act worked because soon enough, he let go of me. “Um…I was j-just won-won-wondering if you had any plans tomorrow.” He stuttered. I scared him! Cool!

“As a matter of fact, I do. Why?” I sneered at his lost puppy look. I should do this “creep MiHyun look” more often.

“Oh...no reason. Um…See you later then.” YunMin sadly left. Okay, that was weird, but fun. Hehe. Scary MiHyun, one. Hot, yet weird YunMin, zero!

--

I opened the front door, seeing the funniest thing ever. YunHo was acting dancing to no music. Just dancing; dancing very well also might I add. He did this cool move, but then landed on his butt. I hurried over to him, dropping my books and backpack.

“Owwwie! Oh, hey nuna.” He slightly blushed then stood up, rubbing his butt.



“Hey, I didn’t know you can dance. That was really cute, YunHo.” I smiled at him.

“I didn’t know it either. Haha.” He laughed then continued dancing. I turned on the stereo system for him. Poor guy dancing without music. A pop song started playing from the CD JiHyun put in earlier when she came.

I went upstairs to my room, starting on the mess of homework that I had. I heard a knock on my door. YunHo was trained well. Hehe. Last time he barged in, he was too sing the ABC’s backwards while hopping down the flight of stairs in one of Umma’s high heels.

“Enter.” YunHo came in with the phone. Gosh I didn’t even hear it ring. It might’ve been the music.

“It’s for you.” He handed me the phone and skipped out the room.

--
“Hello?”
“Hey, Kimmi.”
“Ji?”
“Yeah, who else?”
“Haha, what’s up?”
“Wanted to know if you picked out something to wear for tomorrow.” Right…the party.
“Honestly, no.” Ji gave a scoff. She knew me too well.
“Wanna go to the mall then?”
“Meet you there in a hour.”
“Okay bye thens.”
“See ya.”

We both hung up.

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« Reply #8 on: March 20, 2007, 04:30:15 AM »
Chapter o5

I arrived at the mall wearing simple jeans and a red t-shirt of mine. It wasn't hard to spot out JiHyun, she was sitting on the porch near the fountains. We went to different stores until we settled for the perfect outfit for each other. I purchased a silky black dress that came down to my ankles and Ji got herself a smiliar silky white skirt that came down to her knees, a black tube top with white rhinestones.

We headed to the foodcourt because we were starving when we met Jeanne, JiHyun's boyfriend's sister. Does that make sense? Well, that's what she was.

"Hey guys. Haven't seen you in awhile. What are y'all doing here?" Jeanne walked up to us.

"Hey. Oh, just the usual shopping. What to eat with us?" Ji asked.

"Sure." she said.

We ordered some food and talked and laughed. Ji then asked if Jeanne wanted to come with to the party tomorrow. Of course, Jeanne said yes. We finished up our food and left.

--
It finally arrived, the day of the party. I prepared for it by curling my hair and putting light make up on, something I usually don't do unless it was for something special. Ji picked Jeanne and myself up for the party. By the time we got there, the party had already started. Everyone seemed to be having a great time.
I soon found Andy near the beverage table. I think he saw me first though because he offered me a drink.

"Thank you, Andy." I said, taking the drink from him.

"My pleasure. How do you like the party so far?" He smiled at me.

"It's great. I am having an awesome time."

"Oh that's nice. would you care to dance with me?" I set down both of our drinks and seemed to be blushing.

"Um...sure." It was a fast song, so there was no problem.We were having a fantastic time on the dance floor when the song changed into a slow one. Andy step closer towards me and placed a hand on my waist cautiously. I responded, hesitantly, by putting my hands around his neck. It felt kind of weird, but in a good way...since I didn't know him too well. We were dancing when I looked passed Andy and saw someone I had not expected to see at all today.

I saw YunMin dancing with Jeanne! Great, the party just had to be ruined by him!

I tried to ignore YunMin, but I couldn't. Tears began streaming out of my eyes. The rage of jealously flamed in me. Was it so bad to like him, I couldn't decide. I couldn't help it at all. No matter how hard I tried. Andy seemd to notice.

"What's wrong MIHyun?" He asked, pulling his hand from my waist and placed them on my shoulder, attempting to comfort me.

"Nothing. Nothing at all." I wiped away my tears, but they were replaced with new ones.

"Doesn't seem like nothing." He gazed into my teary eyes, with his concerned ones.

"Excuse me." I said I ran to the restroom. I splashed water on my face continuously. I looked horrible.

I came out of the restroom and ran towards the door. I suddenly bumped into someone.

"Hey watch it!" That person yelled at me.

I looked up at the person, gasping at who I saw.
That person was Yumin.

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« Reply #9 on: March 22, 2007, 05:33:03 AM »
lol... i think im starting to remember this story now XD

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« Reply #10 on: March 23, 2007, 02:52:29 AM »
Chapter o6
“Oh YunMin…” I barely said, a voice so soft; even I didn’t hear myself,” I-I didn’t watch where I was going…s-sorry.” I struggled to say between tears, YunMin nodded and helped me up. Why was I crying all of sudden? Why had the weak side of me appeared so suddenly and overtook my self control. My feminine side poured out, raging the jealousy I comprise. It wasn’t about YunMin. Or Andy for that matter. It was about… him, my oppa. Sudden memories of my old young love crossed my mind. As Andy and I danced to the sweet piano rhythm … it reminded me again of my first love, my oppah…

“It’s alright. Why are you crying, MiHyn. Wait,” He paused, letting go of my arm making me fall back a little, “why are you here? I thought you had plans” YunMin scoffed with a change of attitude.

I couldn’t help but become irritated by his tactics. Crying at this moment, at this party is just enough to anger me. “Well just for your concern, these are my plans. Andy invited me here and now I’m leaving.” I started to storm off, perturbed, but he just had to follow me and grab onto my hand.


"No, don't leave. Not just yet. You haven’t told me why you were crying earlier.” He looked at me sternly, still not letting go of my hand.
 

"Fine, I was crying because Andy accidentally stepped on my foot when we were dancing." I looked at my feet. I am not the greatest liar, and when I do, my cheeks turn red. He finally let go of my hand. Thank goodness!

"Oh,” short pause, “you were dancing with Andy?” he sneered.

"Yes, I was. Do you have a problem with that?” I insisted. Two can play this game.

"No..." He seemed hesitant.

“Okay then, may I go now? I want to get out of here.”

"No! You may not, don’t leave me.” He grabbed my hand again.

"Why?" I was starting to get really pissed off at him. He was acting so strange.

"…because” He said softly.

YunMin's Point of View.


 “…because” It was all I can say.

"Why?" She said. I could see in her beautiful eyes that she felt uncomfortable with me holding her hand. I didn't let go just yet. I wanted to tell her how I felt, but I couldn't. Besides, she doesn't even like me. Why must I confess my emotions to her? Besides, that’s wimpy to do so.

"Because......." I couldn't think of an excuse.

MiHyun broke away from the grip of me holding onto her hand. "Because?"

"Mihyun! There you are!!" Andy came over and hugged her. Just seeing that broke my heart. I tried to stay as calm as possible.

"Hey Andy...." I said.

" Hi, why are you here with MiHyun? What's going on?" He asked. MiHyun was still in his arms. I wanted to punch him so much and hold her in my arms forever but I couldn't.

"Nothing. He just wanted to know why I was crying. That's all." MiHyun said.

"Well in that case, let's go back to the party. Come on." Andy took her hand and led her to the dance floor. I watched as they left. I looked and saw MiHyun turn her back to look at me. I look at her. Finally she turned away and left.

I went over to the beverage table and helped myself to some punch. I kept drink more and more.

"Oppa! there you are!" JiHyun said. Great, just what I needed.

"Hey, Ji. Didn't know you would be here too." I said.

"Yeah, hey, did yo see MiHyun anywhere? She is like a ghost."

"Yeah, she's on the dance floor with Andy." I let out a sigh.

"Hey, what's up?" She looked at me slyly.

"What?"

Ji smiled. "You like her don't you? You do huh??"

Ji was pressuring me. Should I tell my cousin who's MiHyun's best friend?

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« Reply #11 on: March 23, 2007, 06:20:19 PM »
Chapter o7
I looked back at him one last time as Andy dragged me away onto the dance floor. Andy just didn’t seem to get it.

"Andy!" I suddenly said.
“Hm?” He looked over at me.
“Let go of me…please” I tried acting as nicely as my irritable self can manage. He did.
"What's wrong aren’t you having a good time?” He questioned. I looked at my slippers. No. No, I am not. Not with YunMin here.
"No I am not, Andy. I would like to go home if you don't mind." I walked away not waiting for an answer.
I kept on walking and walking avoiding anyone I knew. It wasn't easy at all. What scared me the most was the possibility of running into YunMin again. From a distance I saw him talking to JiHyun so I turned toward the stairs. As I was skipping two steps at a time up the glossy tiled stairs, I ran into Brian, the host of this party. (in case you forgot) He looked surprised to see me. Too surprised. He waited for me to come up the stairs and then went over to talk.

"KImmi? What are you doing here?" He wraps a comforting arm around me. Am I that obvious?
"Uh...I was invited?" Stupid me. I can’t even think straight. Or see straight…tears began to form…
"No. I mean here...alone? Where’s Andy" He gave me a questioning look. What did he mean by 'Where's Andy?'
"He is in your house...somewhere...how should I know?" I crossed my arms. This is getting nowhere. I am supposed to be home on my bed snuggled up to my huge teddy bear. I love that thing.
"I thought he came with you. Aren’t you two an item or something? That's what I heard." He gave me a sly look.
“Where you get that from? Me. Andy Lee. Oh. Em. Geez. EW!” I gave him my disgusted look.

MiHyun and Andy. MiHyun and YunMin. Andy and me. YunMin and me What sounds better?


From the performance I gave in front of Brian and his crew, he got the idea. He took his arm away from me and backed off.

"D*mn woman! No need to blow yo fuse off. It was just a thing we heard. No biggy." JongMin said. Why isn’t he with JiHyun? Brian and his crew came over from standing miles away.

I was wheezing. Really wheezing. Brian slightly patted my back. " Sorry MiHyun. Didn't mean it really." He said.

I looked at them all in disgust. I backed away from them and bumped into the wooden rails of the stairs. “Ouch! D*mn!! Brian and company, who the h*ll did you hear that from?!?!"

"Uh...," JongMin scratched his slick hair,"

He looked over at Brian.

"Well?" I grew impatient.

"Um...like...um...you know... Andy?" Every person in the group said the dreadful name together.

I grew silent, but inside I was raging with fire. I clinched my hand on the rails of the stairs and jumped over. Oh my god. Why did I do THAT?? "AAAHHHHHHH" I fell off the railing.

"KIM MIHYUN!!" Everyone shouted as they ran down the stairs hoping to catch me in time. What did I do to deserve this? What? Where are you when I need you, oppa? Where are you now…



* Flashback*


"Boo!" He said from behind me.

"AH!! Oppa! You scared me. What are you doing here? I thought you left for the airport already." I hugged him and burst into tears.

“I didn't want to leave you just yet. Umma said I could see you one last time before I leave, Kimmi..." He held me in his arms.

"Kimmi?" I looked at him, “you are going to call me that from now on? Kimmi.....Kimmi....I like it. Thanks oppa!" I hugged him.

"Yes. I'll call you Kimmi from now on until forever. When we see each other again, remember who gave you that name." He planted a kiss on my cheek and ran to his umma's car.

"Ok, oppa. Ok. I'll do that." I stood there as the sky cried. Each drop, each tear it gave splattered on me and the earth. I stood there feeling utterly confused. Looking into oppa’s car, seeing him turn back to wave me as the car drove away. I stood there dumbly in the rain...

** End of Flashback **



THUMP. "Ouch..." Someone groaned. I opened my eyes. I closed them? Okay.... I quickly got whoever I pinned down and quickly dodged through the crowds. I ran out the door FINALLY!! I went to find my car. My car. Great. Wait, I came here in JiHyun's car!! Great. Just great. I walked away from the driveway when my cell phone rang to 'Hug'

"Hello?" I looked back at Brian's mansion and walked faster.

"MiHyun? Where are you?"

"Umma? Umma! I am coming home right away. Give me a few minutes. Ji and I were at a party hosted by friend of hers."

"Okay. Dinner's waiting for you on the table."

"Okay. Sarang hae. Bye."

"Bye dear."

Whew. Just umma. I walked faster when I saw the sun beginning to set. I stopped to witness it. Wow absolutely beautiful. The rays were shining through the sky on last time as it began to set. It shined on me too. Just marvelous.

“Just marvelous." I turned around. The voice came from no one other than the only single person that would pop up to ruin my day. Andy.

"Yeah...it ...is..." I simply answered no longer looking at him, but to the sky. I glanced at him and saw he was in a trance. I made a run for it. Luckily, I had no problem running in these slippers of mine. 'La Lotus Blanc', my favorite restaurant that served French dishes, was seen from afar.

“Table for one please... *huh huh*..." I wheezed as I said that. The waiter looked at me questioningly and led me to a table in the back. I sat down as he handed me a menu. I looked through it and settled on a pâté with some bread and milk. Mmm...

"May I sit?" I looked up. It was my stalker.

"No. Of course not." I smirked.

"Okay then." Andy said. He pulled out the chair across from me and sat down. He smiled. I studied him as I tilted my head. He lifted his eyebrow. I looked back at my fingers that were tapping lightly on the table. Another habit of mine when I am nervous. Why am I nervous right now? Andy is just an annoying friend. Right?

"Ho--how d-did y--you find me?" I stuttered out through our silence.

"I followed you in my car. Much faster." He winked

"Okay? Why? How does me leaving the party concern you?"

"It would since you pinned me to the floor and ran out the door." Stating the obvious. To him anyways.

I looked up. "Oh sorry."

"Here you go madam. What would you care to have, monsieur?" The waiter sat down my plate before me. Yay! My food. All my worries and tears vanished. Food is the comforting source of everything.

" No thank you. I would settle on some herbal tea please." Andy said. Herbal tea? Who drinks that at a French restaurant?

I ate my food in silence thinking about that flashback I had of my first love whose name I don’t recall since I was only 8 and about my lovely teddy bear laying innocently on my pillow waiting for me to hug it and cry. Oh, to hug it right now. Nevermind that! The food is better. I began eating. I ignored the presence of Andy until it was too quiet. There weren’t even slurping sounds. I looked and saw the chair directly across from me was empty. I shut my eyes and opened them again. Yep. The chair was definitely empty.

"He left? He left! Great!" I said to myself. Or was that out loud. Oops!

"No, I am right here, Kimmi." I turned around and saw Andy standing behind my chair with a bouquet of white roses in one hand. They took my breath away. I have a thing for white roses. They are just lovely to me.

“Are those for someone special?" Like me? I hope so, but not from ANDY. White roses would be a nice gift, but from someone like...*refer to flashback*

"Actually," Andy said interrupting my thoughts," they are for a friend of mine. She deserves them considering the rough times she has been through. Don't you think so? It’s too bad she had to run away after pinning me to the ground, she didn’t give me an apologetic kiss…" He looked extremely flirtatious right there. Ugh. Did I just think that?

He looked at me grinning. If they are for me, just say so. Unless. No it can't be. Are they for Jeanne? Jeanne and Andy Lee used to go out MONTHS before. Are they still an item? I shook my head at the thought. “Oh? Who might that be?" I looked straight into his eyes.

"Oh, just someone by the name of" He paused. He looked back directly into my eyes too. We continued doing this until my insides flipped, I rose from my chair, and until he drew his hand on top of mine and kept it there. We stood there holding each other's hand until -

"MIHYUN KIM!"
" NUNA!"
" OPPA!"
"ANDY?"
 Six voices I certainly did NOT want to here. Andy felt the same. I think.

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« Reply #12 on: March 26, 2007, 03:59:20 AM »
Chapter o8


YunMin’s POV

Ji smiled. "You like her don't you? You do huh??"

Ji was pressuring me. Should I tell my cousin who's MiHyun's best friend?


I looked at my cup of punch avoiding JiHyun's brown eyes. Should I tell her? Should I? I guess she knew what I was thinking because she said," You can trust me YunMin. This is something between families. I just need to know because I don't want anyone to hurt her. Not even you, understand?"

I nodded. "Yeah…I feel you. And thing is, I guess I’m,” I paused trying to choose the correct words, “…attracted to her. Since the first time I saw her walk into class scrambling to her seat behind me, when she asked me to move my head because my newly-styled hair is in the way. When she glared me down when I was trying to get the new smokin’ hot girl, Linah’s digits…” I confessed, kind of. A man’s got to keep their pride and true intentions for themselves, you know?

I saw MiHyun walking towards Andy, but something was bugging her for real. She walked towards the stairs, I wanted to follow her, but then I saw Linah passing by, winking at me. I winked back, of course.

“Wait…so you’re saying you maybe like MiHyun but still think that revealing sl-t of an exchange student is hot? What’s gotten into you?!” JiHyun said, smacking my head.

Wait. What? “What did you say? Oh, hell…no dongseng. I didn’t mean it like that. Besides, MiHyun didn’t say anything about me, right? Tell your oppah now JiHyun!” I started freaking out.

“She doesn’t like you.” She smirked, walking off.

“What?” I shouted to her. How can anyone not be attracted to this hunk of loveliness?

I went to find Andy; he was looking around, probably for MiHyun. “Yo.” I greeted him.

"Sup YunMin. Have you seen my girl? She is like a breeze and just passes you by..." He shrugged.

"Your girl? Who's that? Jeanne? I thought you two broke up already, dawg." Andy better not be thinking about MiHyun being his. Grrr...I clinched my fist up getting ready to punch him out...

"Hell no, man. I’m through with her, she’s too much to handle. ‘Sides JongMin hyung thinks I’m not good enough for his dongseng. Kimmi…she’s my girl! We have been together for the last month. She didn't tell you?" He is bluffing I know it. It's in his eyes. He's bluffing.

"ME! ANDY LEE!! Ew! We both heard from upstairs.

"What was that?" We said.

Before I could answer, I saw a girl jump off the railings of the stairs. "Holy sh-t! Andy watch out, d-mn it!” I shoved him out of the way, but to his luck she landed on him.

"KIM MIHYUN!" Brian's crew yelled out and stormed down the stairs. They began crowding around Andy and the girl. Was that MiHyun?

"Is she ok?"
"Is Andy oppa Alright? I could've done that to land on him..."
"Is she dead?"
"HAHAHAHAHA They can't rent a room so they do it right here right now.”
“ NICE. HAHAHAHAHA."

People started crowding around them more. Suddenly, the girl got up off Andy and ran into the crowds of people.

"Who was that?" I asked Brian.

"MiHyun. Who else?" Holy sh-tt. Oh no. I ran through the people trying to catch up after her but.....

"Where do you think you are going?" Andy popped out of nowhere.....uh oh.

"Trying to find MiHyun. You?" What’

"Lay off man. The girl's taken." He pushed me and ran out the door.

'H-ll no! No way. She is not taken. MiHyun is not taken. Keep telling myself that. MiHyun isn't taken.' I kept mumbling to myself as I headed back to the punch bowl. The party was almost over so might as well finish off the punch.

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« Reply #13 on: March 26, 2007, 04:27:07 AM »
lol hahahah... of course shes "not" taken =P

rofl "tried pushing andy out of the way but to his look she landed on him" xP

hope u psot soon

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« Reply #14 on: March 27, 2007, 07:01:32 PM »
Chapter o9
MiHyun’s POV

At Le Lotus Blanc-

Ugh. I did not want to see them. Sigh. I looked over at Andy who was now walking over to the six people, YunMin, YunHo, Jeanne, JongMin, JiHyun and…Linah.


Who said what before?
MiHyun Kim was said by JongMin and YunMin, using my full name. Sheesh.
Nuna was said by YunHo, how did he get here?
Oppah was said by Jeanne, why is she involved in this?
Andy was said by JiHyun and Linah, what do they want.

Many questions ran through my mind, I didn’t understand why their presence was here so suddenly…why they were all here.

"Hello guys. Party's over already?" I said casually. I glanced over at YunMin who had his fist so tightly clenched that I think he's really to punch someone out.

"No. Ahem, we were looking for our guest of honors. Ahem." JongMIn said, clearing his throat. Guests of honor? What did that mean?

"What are you talking about hyung?" Andy inquired.

"You people didn't know? The only reason we had that party is because both of your ummas had arranged that you two were to be married. DUH!!!" JiHyun said. The 'DUH' part was everyone said.

I looked at Andy and he looked at me. "WHAT?" We exclaimed together. I dropped the roses and backed away from Andy as much as possible. Everyone laughed. I hurriedly went over to the cashier to pay for my meal and then called my umma.

"Hwello? Kim residence. YunHo speaking." Dang, I accidently called YunHo’s phone. No wonder it was ringing all of a sudden.

"Haha, very funny YunHo." I looked at him. He cracked up hysterically.
I dialed my home number this time.

"Hello?" My umma said.

"Umma? There is something I want to discuss with you when I get home."

"Yes. We need to talk. Have Andy drive you home." She said sternly.

"What? Why?" This is too confusing, really.

"The FOUR of us need to talk." Four?

“Who Umma?” Too late, she already hung up.

I went over to tell the seven people that YunHo and I need to go home. I grabbed on YunHo's collar and dragged him out of the restaurant.

"Wait MiHyun! Let me take you home." YunMin offered.

"No thanks. I'll take her." Andy said. I looked at him with the white roses I dropped earlier.

"Alright then." YunMin said then offered a ride to the girls. Whatever.

YunHo and I followed Andy to his red Nissan 350Z. Nice.
"Sweet car. Thank you." He opened the door for me. YunHo hopped in first. Okay? I walked in and Andy closed the door and smiled at me. Very gentlemanly of him. Hmm.

"No problem. Where to?" He turned around facing us.

"Uh...Our house?" YunHo said giggling.

"Oh yea." Andy laughed. He must have forgotten where it was or was in a daze or something. He drove in silence. YunHo was singing to the blasted music coming from the MP3 player installed in Andy’s car. When we arrived to my house, Andy got out and opened the door for me again. I walked out with YunHo trailing me.

“Teddy bear, here I come baby!” I gleefully said without thinking.

"Baby?" He lifted his eyebrow. Andy was having dirty thoughts.

I punched him." Not that kind." I opened the door and bowed to my umma and…Andy’s who was also sitting down. "Anhyoung hae saeyo."

"Anhyoung." Umma gestured for us to sit. "YunHo, go to your room and play with your X box." YunHo bowed also, running upstairs.

I sat next to umma and Andy sat across from us next to his. “You probably know why you are here. We have something we wish to discuss with you two." Andy's umma started off.

"When your appa passed away, his dying wish was that to have you two reunite at the age of 18." Umma said to me and Andy. I think that was referred to me, since Andy still has his appa.

"Wait, what? When was this? Did everyone agree or something? You didn't ask us what we think of this!" Andy busted out shouting. I ran upstairs into my room and instantly hugged my teddy bear and cried. I do not want to marry a jerk like him!

-Flashback-

"Kimmi, when we see each other again as one, remember that I still and always will love you" He said over the phone.

"Okay, oppa. I will I will remember every single word of it. But oppa, what does 'love' mean?" I told him back.

"Kimmi...to love is to have someone in your heart forever as long time takes, just-remember this. Remember that I love you..." He hung up on me. The dial tone rang. I shed tears and hung up the phone.

He loves me I thought. He might truly love me. My Oppa…

-End of Flashback-

Can it be? Who was that person I thought to myself as I cried on my teddy bear, making it wet. I didn't care anymore. I didn't care.

All I needed to know was who was the one that said that?

-Knock,knock-

"Come in..." I said thinking it was YunHo.

"Hey...are you alright Kimmi?"

I sat up from my bed. YunHo was to only call me Nuna. Who was that then? I lifted my head from my teddy bear and sitting on the edge of my bed was Andy.

"No I can't lie to you. I am not alright. I feel terrible," I scooted over to him. He held me in his arms, “I don't understand. How can appa do this to me...how...?” I started wailing all over again.

"Hush...Kimmi...it will all work out. My umma said that if one of us refuses, the dying wish will be canceled. It will all work out, okay?" He changed the subject trying to comfort me. "Here," He handed me the white rose," they were for someone else, but I think you deserve them more than anyone else in the world." I took them from him and looked at them. They looked so familiar. The same bouquet of roses he had once given me...I remembered the petals and everything....OPPA!! Where are you?

"I am right here. Kimmi. I am right here. Kimmi. Look. Oppa is right here. Turn around. Kimmi. Oppa is right here." The breeze sad as it passed my room out toward the window. It was him...my oppa...my oppa who left me years ago...he came back!

I turned from the window and Andy was gone, and so was my oppa…

I didn’t get to see him, I can’t find him anywhere.

 

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