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« Reply #15 on: January 31, 2007, 11:41:47 PM »
I am eager to type this but... *sigh* I really wanted to finish one or two of the fanfics... But... This fanfic is calling me to write it... ^^;;

Chapter 1

The past...

This happens when I am 12 years old. I'm still in a middle school.

I was a good ballet dancer and I was choosen to be in an audition.

I received an invitation letter from my ballet teacher. She told me to give it to eomma and so I did.

I went back home happily and eomma was cooking dinner! Yummy! ^^

Anyway, I quietly walked behind eomma but she knew I was going to scare her.

'How's you day?' She asked. I was really disappointed that eomma knows I am going to scare her. 'It was fine. Eomma! Guess what?' Eomma stopped cooking. She turned and looked at me. 'What is it, honey?'

I smiled at her and flashed her the invitation card. She took it and she gave me a big smile and hugged. 'Aww.... I'm sooo proud of you!'

'Can you make it?' I asked her. She froze for a short while. She broke the hug and looked at me in the eyes. 'Honey, I don't know if I can make it but I will try to come, ok?'

I was thinking that eomma will not come due to her heavy work. She was a tailor.

'Oh ok... I hope you can come.' I told her. 'I will, EunJoo. I will.' She gave me a smile. 'Come... We don't want the food to turn cold.'

We ate our dinner happily.

Oh... About abeoji... He cheated on eomma when I was 3 years old. He re-married with another woman. Unfortunately, he passed away. He had a car accident on the way to work. Eomma and my so-called "step-mother", hated each other.

A week later, I was really nervous for the audition.

As for eomma, she was busy with her work and she has to serve her customers.

I was really shivering and had sweaty palms. 'Eomma... Where are you?' I kept looking outside the stage curtains.

When it is my turn to dance, I greeted the judges and started to dance.

Not concentrating on my moves, I kept falling down and looked at the seats. She was still not there! EOMMA!!! WHERE ARE YOU?! I was really angry!

When my ballet teacher came to me, she has the sad look on her face. 'EunJoo ah? I'm sorry to say this but...'

'Your eomeoni died in an accident on the way here.' I froze for a short while. Tears rolling down to my cheeks. 'EOMMA!!!!!' I screamed at the stage and cried really hard. I even collapsed. My ballet teacher managed to catch me and sent me to the sick bay.

My ballet teacher and myself were rushing to the hospital.

In the ward, I saw her face for the very last time. I held her hand. 'Eomma...'

3 days after eomma's death, I stayed with my step-mother for 3 years. When I entered high school, my step-mother threw me out in the house. I had no where to stay. So, I stayed at a rented house. I had no money so I have to find as many jobs as I can.

I worked in a hotel as a cleaner and a cashier in a supermarket.

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My first day of high school, I made 2 new friends, one of them are actually half Japanese and Korean. Her father is a Korean and her mother is a Japanese. Her name is Hana.

Hana is somehow a tomboyish type. She was an ex-gangster back then.

I met another girl. She is more to the "Dark-Side". Meaning, she is a gothic person. She always wears black. Even her nails are black! (Black polish...) Additional... She wears eyeliner. I know it is natural for gothics to wear that kind of stuff.

I heard a lot of girls especially the sophomore students always talked about this guy named, Kim RyeoWook. He has the face of a girl but he has the guy's charms. He was really popular. RyeoWook is also a freshman like me but we do not talk much.

He is actually my classmate. I was really eager to talk to him but... He was very quiet and shy.

We heard that RyeoWook ssi declined a sophomore. She tried to hug him but he pushed away without a single word!

Anyway... I guess that's all the past things I've said...
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« Reply #16 on: February 01, 2007, 04:11:46 AM »
Cool chapter!

The bit where she dances.. it kinda reminded me of the movie "Save the last Dance". Anyway.. Cool chapter!

I wonder what things you might change..

Post soon!

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« Reply #17 on: February 01, 2007, 09:47:54 PM »
oo i like ur first chapter!!!!!

all in the past?! does this mean she is still in high skool but almost graduating?!?!

hope u post soon!
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« Reply #18 on: March 18, 2007, 01:19:45 PM »
Chapter 2

*riiiiiiiiiiiiiiing*

*slams the clock*

I opened my eyes slowly and looked at the clock and closed my eyes again. If I am not wrong, I saw the long clock hand was pointing on the 7 and the short clock hand was pointing on the 6.

'OMO!!! 7:30!!!! I'm late!!!!'

To tell you the truth, this is not my first time being late. I have been working very hard and came home late at night. Unless you have forgotten, I am currently working part-time.

After I got ready for school, the Landlady was in front of my door. 'Kim EunJoo!' I swallowed my saliva down to my throat. 'Where's my 2-month rent money?'

I scratched my head. 'Uh... Ajumma... I'm sorry but, I did not have cash to pay you... If my salary comes, I'll pay you as soon as possible. Now if you excuse me... I'm late for school.'

'Yah!!! You haven't eaten your breakfast!' The landlady shook her head. 'Aish... What am i going to do with this girl?'

I took my neighbours bicycle to school as I was kind of in a hurry when I almost hit the car. 'Phew...' Then, saw this guy was walking to school and I fell off the bike. He turned around and came to me.

'Are you alright?' The familiar voice!

I did not look up. I was looking at my knee. It was bleeding. 'Let me help you.'

He took out his tissue and kneeled down. Kim RyeoWook ssi?

'This is gonna hurt.' I stared at him. He pressed the tissue on my knee and I screamed my lungs out.

Surprisingly, the 2 freshmen girls, BoBae and Hyori saw RyeoWook and me near the road. 'Omo! HeeJin ah? Look!' One of the girl pointed and HeeJin turned around. 'WHAT?!!!'

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I was walking, holding on to the bike and RyeoWook accompanied me to school. 'So, where did you live? Maybe I can accompany you home after school?'

I was shocked and looked at him. 'Ohh... Uh... You don't have to! I'm fine actually.' My face went red! I did not believe he talked to me! 'Well, it's your choice.' He gave me the cute smile. He smiles?

'Oh? Cat!' RyeoWook looked at the cat and suddenly frowned.

'I hate cats.' I felt that my heart cracked into half.

'What makes you say that?' I asked him in a cold tone.

'Cats are fools.' My heart completely shattered like shattered glass.

hey.... chapter 2 is done... I hope i can update some fanfics during my 3 weeks holiday! ^^ starting from 24th March! ^^v Just pray that I can make as many fanfics... your reply encourages me... so... yeah... ^^ Hope u enjoyed...
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« Reply #19 on: March 18, 2007, 02:57:07 PM »
omg why does he hate cats?!
cats r not fools!!!!!!!
cats r cute and good to play with even if they do scratch u.....

yay new update!
i'll be waiting for chapter 3!
~If you want to learn to love better, you should start with a friend who you hate~

(a little girl who's only 8 said this!!)

 

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