6th piece chapter of inlove with one

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so then back ot kim bae and jae joong they were freezing the room hugging each other to make bodyheat..
 then a there was a noise....

 kim bae:what was that??

 jae joong:i dont know but im cold...

 kim bae:me too but lets go check it out!!

 so they went to go see where the noise was coming from.. then they looked in a closet.........
 and they say all the guys who took them there... they were all sitting smoking and talking.. so jae joong and
 kim bae was listening to what they were saying:

 1 guy: hey what are we going to do to the kids??

 2 guy: we are going to kill them of course!!

 3 guy: yeah we are going to shot them and then push them in to ocean.

 2 guy: but where are we going to kill them??

 but the guys knew they were listning becuase one of the guy saw them looking at them...

 so kim bae and jae joong were whispering to each other...

 kim bae:what are we going to do??

 jae joong:umm when they fall alseep we will run out ok!!

 kim bae:good idea!! but where is the door out!!

 jae joong: we wil just look as we run but we will have to be carful ok??

 kim bae:ok got it!!

 but they didnt know that the guys were listining to them talk...
 so kim bae and jae joong snuggled up together becuase of the cold weather...
 
 as for yuhno he was walking in the city just dazing off where he can find kim bae.. but yet worrying about jae
 joong and the others too as well....

 and then while kim bae and jae joong was sleeping jae joong smelled somthing??

 jae joong:huh whats that smell??

 so he looked in out he door and saw fire every where!!

 jae joong:wake up kim bae WAKE UP!!!

 but kim bae fainted from the smell of fire long ago already but jae joong didnt know...

 jae joong:WAKE UP KIM BAE YOONG!!

 so jae joong didnt know what to do so he took kim bae on the back ond tired to get out but then he fell over by
 tripping over the wood and the pole for holding the stairs up fell on jae joong and kim bae then there was a blank.

 then yuhno was walking and saw the fire and called the police and put out the fire and yuhno helped put out the
 fire. when yuhno went inside he saw jae joong and kim bae so he took kim bae out and told then police and they came
 in to get jae joong out and went to the hospital right away..

 jae joong:what happened??

 yuhno: you were in this old garage and it cought on fire.. but i went in and saw you and kim bae yoong!!

 jae joong:ohh where is kim bae yoong?? where is she??

 yuhno:she is in the other room!!

 hero:let me go see her if she is ok!!

 so then hero tried to get out of bed but then he almost fell off the bed but then yuhno cought him before he fell..

 yuhno:relax she is ok the doctor saids you and her needs alot of rest...

 weeks had passed and max,junsu,micky, and yuhno broght gifts for jae joong and kim bae... but the problem was that
 kim bae was still sleeping never woke up yet....

 everybody was worried but jae joong didk=nt know becuase they didnt want jae joong to worry when he was in a
 bad condition...

 jae joong: i want to see kim bae i didnt get to see her ever since the accident!!

 max:but you cant!!

 junsu:yeah she is in the bathroom!!

 micky:you go in there right? so just sit down and rest!!

 hero:but i can walk i got my cast off already im healthy now i can walk correctly i got no problems i want to go
 see her!!
 so hero walked out of the room to go to kim baes room. he opens the door..

 hero:kim bae yoong??

 he looks at her... and she was still sleeping...

 hero:bae yoong??kim bae yoong??

 then everybody walks in...

 yuhno:the doctor said......

 hero:what!! what did the doctor say??

 micky:the doctor said hse needed to rest!!

 hero:ok then i will wait and watch her then...

 so hero sat next to her while everybody else gets out of the room then all started to cry.....
 back in the room...

 hero:kim bae yoong... you know how scared i was... i thoght you would of died..

 then the doctor came in....

 docter:umm what are you doing here??

 hero:oh um waiting for her to wake up..??why??

 doctor:ohh wells you will have to wait a long time then...

 hero:what do you mean??

 doctor:the others didnt tell you??

 hero shooks his head..

 hero:no they didnt what wrong??

 doctor:she never woke up ever since the accident...

 hero grabes the doctor..

 hero:what?? what did you just say??

 then everybody comes in..

 junsu:stop jae joong..

 micky:its not his fualt...

 max:he is just an doctor......

 hero:your right.. your right.. its my fualt... everything is my fualt...

 yuhno:dont say that... it was a accident..

 hero:yeah i cuased the accident to harm ms.bae yoong...


pleaz comment hehe i know its dorky so im sorry for that i dont tink im going to write my other story anymore so pleaz comment hehe im working on it but im been so buzy wit skool work and this week i have a skool prooject it may take some time so i hope u guys enjoyed it hehe

[Aazngurl]

awww! she never woke up?
post soon! i got to noe the ending!

[xmissdarknessx]

poor kim bae... T-T... um... im not trying to be rude or something but... can you please use one thread instead of multiplying lots of chapters on the board? thanks!