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The Unforgettable :YunHo & YooChun: (Season 3)
« Reply #15 on: October 26, 2006, 04:48:03 AM »
Chapter 2

The next day after school, 'KyunShin ah? I promised ChoShin that we will tour her around the town!'

'Wait... We?' YunHo nodded. 'Oh come on... Please? For ChoShin's sake.'

'Ugh... Ok...'

So, YunHo and KyunShin made their way home and changed into their home clothes and began walking together with ChoShin. YunHo stood beside her.

KyunShin stood beside YunHo. They were talking about their future when YunHo bumped into a man who was rushing from something. Suddenly, YunHo heard a car horning when he realised that ChoShin is going to get knocked down.

'ChoShin ah?' YunHo took her arm and pulled her close to him. ChoShin looked a little panicked. 'What happened?'

'You...' He stared at ChoShin. This... is like a drama! YunHo thought. 'U-Know ah? Are you okay?'

'Oh... You were almost hit by a car.'

YunHo let go of ChoShin. 'Yah! Are you okay?' KyunShin asked. 'Yes, KyunShin oppa. I'm fine.' She smiled. Wow! Not bad for a 12 year old boy to start a drama scene ^^.

'ChoShin ah? I suggest you should stick with me.' YunHo held her hand and walked together. 'ChoShin ah? Let's get some ice-cream!'

'Wow! I haven't eat that for 5 years!'

'Why?' YunHo asked. 'Five years ago, I was having a very high fever. I did not visit the doctor earlier when I woke up, I could not see anything! It was pitch black! I thought I was shutting my eye when I cried for my eomeoni.'

KyunShin looked at ChoShin. YunHo too. 'Eomeoni asked the doctor and the doctor said that because of the high fever, I became blind. He also said that I was lucky that I lost my eye sight. If not, I might lose my hearings and my voice.'

ChoShin cried. 'ChoShin ah? Don't cry.' KyunShin wiped her tears away. YunHo felt a bit of jealousy but he have to respect his elders.

'It's getting late! We should go back. See you, ChoShin! See you too, U-Know!' YunHo waved. 'Bye oppa!' YunHo was wondering why ChoShin kept calling KyunShin oppa.

Maybe she too have to respect the elder...

'Thank you for the ice-cream, U-Know.' YunHo smiled. 'Doesn't matter.'

ChoShin went in and YunHo looked happy.

Few weeks later, KyunShin, ChoShin and YunHo went to the mall. When KyunShin wanted to do some "business", ChoShin told YunHo. 'U-Know ah?'

He looked at her. 'Yups?'

'I wish I could see the world again. I wanted to see how you look like.' YunHo smiled. 'Since I went to the special school, may I touch your face?'

YunHo stared at her. 'Yeah... Sure.'

She touches YunHo's forehead, his hair, eyes, nose, lips and the cheeks. 'You're cute.' YunHo smile. 'Your smile too.'

YunHo began to blush.

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3 years later...

KyunShin, ChoShin and YunHo were like a dynamic trio! Never be separated! ChoShin went to the special school for the blind.

'Eomeoni? Are you sure that you're bringing me to UK for an eye operation?'

'Yes dear. It was the doctor's advice and your father's advice. You once said that you wanted to see the world once again right?' She nodded.

'Well, this year is your lucky day.' Her mother said. 'But... How long does it take?' She asked. 'Maybe 3 years.' How am I going to say to U-Know?

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'U-Know ah? I told you before that I wanted to see the world right?' YunHo nodded. 'Yeah?'

'I won't be seeing you for 3 years.'

'Why not?' He asked. 'I'm going to England and... The doctor will get my eyes fixed. I know it takes a lot of time because... I need some time to learn how to read books, newspaper, see the world, etc.'

YunHo clearly understood. 'You promise you'll be back after that?' She nodded. 'I pinky swear you.' ChoShin said and YunHo pinky sweared her. 'You promised and pinky square me. Don't you dare violate that.'

She laughed. 'Ok Mr. Violence.'

KyunShin and YunHo visited ChoShin at the airport with her mother. 'We're going to miss you.' She smiled. 'I'm gonna miss you too, U-Know.'

YunHo hugged ChoShin. He always wanted to do that.

Flashbacks... 2 years ago...

'KyunShin ah? I think I have feelings for ChoShin. At school, I always think of her. I could not get her out of my mind. Promise me you won't tell her.'

'No.. I won't.'

END

YunHo broke the hug and KyunShin hugged ChoShin. 'Bye oppa.' KyunShin smiled. 'Yeah... Be careful out there.'

'I will, oppa. Bye U-Know! See you for the next three years!'

She waved at him.

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For the past next three years, KyunShin wanted to see YunHo.

'YunHo ah? I'm... Going overseas to study plus... My parents were promoted. I'll try to contact you whenever I can.'

'Where are you going?' KyunShin looked down and looked at him. 'Paris.' YunHo nodded. 'Ok then... Study hard, yar?' KyunShin nodded. 'I will.'

'When will you leaving? Do you want to see ChoShin first? She might be coming back you know?' KyunShin smiled. 'I can't. I wish I could see her but... I'm really sorry.'

KyunShin already left and YunHo was still waiting for ChoShin to come back.
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« Reply #16 on: October 26, 2006, 06:25:44 AM »
i'm first! haha! *enthusiasm* ^^ Poor Yunho, his two best friends left him TT__TT i cant wait to read Micky's part of the story! ^^
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« Reply #17 on: October 26, 2006, 08:03:24 AM »
Yea...i can't wait 4 it too!!

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« Reply #18 on: October 26, 2006, 09:12:35 AM »
AA !! Third to post after these 2 beautifuls chapters X) !!!! Thx again xmissdarknessx >.< !!! Post soon !! I can't wait !!! Very hurry for Micky's story XD !!! And also, I wonder what means "Eomeoni".. I knew for Oppa , Unnie , Ajusshi but is Eomeoni like as Mum ??
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« Reply #19 on: October 26, 2006, 09:51:01 AM »
Eomeoni is mother
eomma is mum... ^^
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« Reply #20 on: October 26, 2006, 01:48:57 PM »
some of you are eager to know YooChun's part... lol... fine... I'll give you the Chapter 3! Enjoy!

Chapter 3

YooChun's story:

When YooChun was 15, his elder brother, Yul were very close. They did not argue over small things. They respect each other. Their father and their mother divorced when they were very young.

Yul and YooChun went to the same middle school and high school.

Yul has many admirers. Mostly are around YooChun's age.

'Ok class, welcome back from your 3 months holidays and there is a new girl in this school. Kim KyungSoon? Can you come in please?' A shy girl walks in and YooChun's heart beats faster like a train.

'Why don't you introduce yourself to the class?' The teacher said.

'Oh... Uh... Hi... My name is Kim KyungSoon. I am a shy girl... And... I hope to make friends with some of you who are willing to be friends with me.' She bowed. 'Ok... KyungSoon, You may sit in front of YooChun.'

The teacher pointed and she sat in front of him.

'YooChun ah?' It was recess and YooChun turned. 'Hyung!' Yul sat beside YooChun. 'I heard there's a new student in your class!' YooChun looked at Yul. 'Oh... Yeah... *eats his food*'

'Who?' Yul asked. 'It's a girl.' Yul looked very interested. 'Really? What's her name? How is she looked like?'

'She's in front of us.' YooChun said. Yul looked to the front and the girl was laughing with her new friends. 'She's... Pretty.'

'Yeah... I know...' YooChun said. 'Wh... What's her name?'

'Uh... Kyung something...' YooChun could not remember her name! After recess, YooChun wanted to go back to the classroom when Yul pulled him. 'Yah! You must know her name and get to know her!'

'Why are you so desperate?' YooChun asked. 'Just ask her! Go!' Yul pushed him and YooChun ran back to class when he slipped on the wet floor and sort of holds someone's hip and fell.

'Ow!!!' A girl's voice moaned in pain. 'I'm sorry... I didn't mean... to...'

YooChun stood up and offered his hand. She stood up, holding his hand and YooChun put his arm around her hips so that she could balance.

'Thanks. Are you... My new classmate?' KyungSoon asked. He nodded. 'What's your name?'

'Umm... The class has begin... I'll tell you later.' She smiled and went in the classroom. YooChun could not believe that he... talked to her.

While waiting for the teacher to come, YooChun tapped KyungSoon's shoulder and she turned. 'I'm Park YooChun.' He offered his hand for a handshake and she took it.

'KyungSoon. If you have forgotten.' She smiled. 'I did.' They laughed and started talking.

'Really? I don't have a sibling at all! I'm the only child in the family. Can't you believe it?' She said not feeling shy anymore. 'Umm... KyungSoon ah?'

'Yup?'

'Would you... like to hang out with my brother and me after school?' YooChun asked. 'What? Me? Gosh... First day in school, no one ever asked me to hang out!'

'You mean... You did not have friends back at school?' She shook her head. 'People thinks I'm weird. They did not talk to me and my eomma knows about it. She decided that I should shift school. Evetually, I have a friend like you talking and asking me out.'

She looked at YooChun. 'Thanks.' She added. YooChun smiled.

After school, Yul waited for YooChun and the girl he wanted to meet. 'KyungSoon? Meet my brother, Yul. Hyung? Meet KyungSoon.' Yul took off his cap and introduce himself.

'Hi, I'm Yul. Elder brother of lovely YooChun. Nice to meet you.' He bowed with his cap on his chest. Greeting to her like a gentleman. KyungSoon laughed. 'Shall we?'

They hung out around the mall for awhile when KyungSoon remembered that she should be home before 3.

'Omo! I forgot! I have to be home... Eomma might blast at me for going home late!' She said. Yul and YooChun flagged for KyungSoon a cab. 'By the way... Thanks! See you tomorrow YooChun!' She waved at YooChun and Yul.

'She's sooo pretty.' Yul said.
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« Reply #21 on: October 26, 2006, 02:50:16 PM »
Wowww !! Already the chapter 3 ?? Thx so much !! Was waiting for Micky's story >v< !!! Post soon X) ! And thx for the info!
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« Reply #22 on: October 26, 2006, 08:43:03 PM »
u r so good at writing. i wonder why i cant be as good at u. :(
post soon please!!!!! i was reading and i got mixed up cuz i thought that u didn't finish the 2nd one yet. but i just read it and then read theese three chapters!!1 ur so good!!! post soon!
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« Reply #23 on: October 27, 2006, 12:32:07 AM »
Ur really fast.......and ur good too..... lol :wink:

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« Reply #24 on: October 27, 2006, 03:10:26 AM »
Haha... Thanks! Well, I read lots of books from Meg Cabot and Julie Ortolon! Their my idols! ^^ They inspire me to make stories... ^^

I don't know if this might be long or short... Because today, i'm going to watch Death Note with my frens... I will post it tomorrow... Damn... I have a Family Day tomorrow... that sucks... Hope you girls can wait on Sunday?(my time: singapore +8hrs) Hope u enjoy this chapter 4...


Chapter 4

YooChun has a feeling that Yul likes KyungSoon. Isn't that too soon to fall in love with her? YooChun too likes her but... He was too afraid to express it to her.

As they went home, Yul could not stop thinking of KyungSoon and talked about her. Suddenly, Yul had a sore throat and the next day he has a high fever.

'YooChun ah? You don't mind going to school alone?' Yul asked. 'Yeah... I don't mind... I wil tell KyungSoon about it.' Yul smiled. 'Thanks!'

'You take a rest first and take your medicine on time.' He nodded. 'Yes, father... I'm a grown up now...' YooChun gave him the adorable angel smile and left the house.

'Bye eomma!'

YooChun took his bicycle and cycled to school. He switched on his MP3 and listened to Keane's Crystal Ball. And he sang it along too.

Oh, crystal ball, crystal ball,
Save us all, tell me life is beautiful,
Mirror, mirror on the wall.
Oh, crystal ball, hear my song,
I'm fading out, everything I know is wrong,
So put me where I belong.


Then, he saw KyungSoon walking to the school. He cycled towards her and rang the bell. She turned. 'YooChun ah?' He brake and took out his headphone. 'Hi KyungSoon.'

'Where's Yul?' She asked. 'He has a high fever. You want to visit him after school?' YooChun offered. 'Of course! He's my friend! I have to visit him.' She said with a big smile on her face.

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After school, YooChun unlock his bike. 'Wanna ride?' He asked KyungSoon. 'Hah? Uh... I don't know.'

YooChun smiled. 'Come on... It's just once in a lifetime.' She was blushing and sat in front of YooChun and he kept cycling. For the first time in his life, KyungSoon was the first one to sit on the bike with him.

'We're here!' YooChun said. KyungSoon got off first then, YooChun put it aside. He unlocked the door. 'Eomma! There's a visitor!' YooChun's mother came out from the kitchen. 'Oh! Hi there! Come in... Have a sit!'

KyungSoon sat down on the chair. 'I'll get you a drink.' YooChun said and went in the kitchen. Before that, he put down his bag in his room and gave iced lemon tea drink.

'Thanks.' She took a sip of it. 'Uh... Sungmo(aunt), may I see Yul oppa for a little while?' She asked. 'Yeah sure! He's in his room. Micky!!' HE has a nickname? KyungSoon thought.

YooChun came out from the kitchen. 'Yes, eomma?'

'Bring her to Yul's room.' His mother said. 'Yeah... Follow me.' KyungSoon followed him. 'So... You're nickname is Micky?' He smile and nodded. 'Pretty cute name for a cute guy like you.'

He blushed. 'Thanks.'

'Can I call you Micky too?' He looked at her. 'My friends did not know about my nickname accept Yul and my eomma. Well, I guess you're the first one to call me that.' She smiled. 'So can I?' He nodded.

'Hyung? KyungSoon's here.' Yul sat up from his bed. 'Hey! You came!' She smiled. 'Come... Sit beside me.' KyungSoon looked at YooChun and he nodded. It's like asking permission but they are NOT dating.

She sat beside him. 'Be carefeul, KyungSoon. He might pass the germs at you.' KyungSoon laughed. 'I'll be fine.' YooChun left the room and Yul sat close to KyungSoon.

'So... How are you feeling?' KyungSoon asked. 'I'm... Fine...' KyungSoon puts her hand on his forehead. 'You're hot.'

'Thanks...' She looked at Yul. 'Very funny.' Yul took her hand. 'I'm hurting here.' He leads her hand on his chest. 'I know this is pretty fast, KyungSoon but... I have a feeling for you.'

YooChun entered and they did not notice him. He went aside and listen to every word his brother said. 'KyungSoon, will you be my girlfriend?' YooChun let go of the glass he was holding and it shattered like his heart has.

Yul stood up and went to the door. 'Be careful! You might hurt your leg.' YooChun said, not looking at Yul. 'Micky! Are you okay?' He looked at KyungSoon. No...

'Yeah... I'm fine...' He took off his shirt and started to clean the floor.
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« Reply #25 on: October 27, 2006, 04:30:15 AM »
Micky's story! yay! i personally like Micky more than Yunho, so yea...poor Micky, its so sad... TT__TT
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« Reply #26 on: October 27, 2006, 09:13:34 AM »
i actually prefer yunho to mickey.....no prob...we can wait till sunday

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« Reply #27 on: October 27, 2006, 10:07:17 AM »
i like both stories >.< !!! lol ! aa !! so long sunday X( !!!! but i'll wait til sunday ^^ ! Good job and have a nice week end ^_^V !
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« Reply #28 on: October 27, 2006, 08:12:31 PM »
=D sunday isn't so long away...
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« Reply #29 on: October 28, 2006, 02:27:16 PM »
finally have a free time to post... This is a continuos... Enjoy the Chap 4.5!

Chapter 4.5[/u]

As he was cleaning to floor, KyungSoon helped him. 'Let me help you.'

'I'm fine...' He said calmly then, he left. KyungSoon stood up and Yul collapse. 'Yul!' She touched his forehead and it's getting worse. 'Micky!!! Yul? Yul?'

'Hyung!' YooChun ran to Yul. 'Eomma!!! Yul fainted!' His mother ran to Yul. 'Yul goon!' (hehe... yups... Just wanna add in from Goong... Love that show!)

YooChun called the hospital and Yul was sent there immediately. KyungSoon followed too. They waited for 3 hours. KyungSoon went towards the worried YooChun.

'Micky ah? Yul would be fine...' She said, rubbing his back. 'Won't your parents get worried?' He asked. 'Omo! I forget about it!' YooChun smiled. 'You can be forgetful sometimes.' She smiled. 'I'm sorry.'

'Don't be. I'll send you home.' She nodded and YooChun accompanied her home. 'I heard that Yul asked you out?'

'Huh? Oh... Yeah... He did.' KyungSoon faced down. 'Did you accept it?' She looked at him. 'Not yet when you dropped your glass of water.' She said.

'What do you think of Yul?' YooChun asked. 'Well, we met yesterday and... I think Yul is... Fun.' YooChun laughed. 'He's always fun.' She laughed along. 'Micky ah? You're funnier than Yul.'

The way she laughed really did made him like her more and want to know her more! 'KyungSoon ah? Since we are friends, why don't we talk about our likings?'

'Yeah... I'll start first! I like red roses because they're romantic. I love milk chocolates and I like teddy bears. Big teddy bears. The funny thing about me is... Even though I'm a girl, I... Dislike to wear high heels because... The first time I wear those, I had a swollen leg the next day.'

YooChun laughed. 'Yah! It's not funny! If you tell this to anyone... I'll swear I'll kill you!' She suddenly pinned him to the wall and grabbed his collar. She did not do this before. She quickly let go of YooChun.

'I'm... I'm...' She started to run away from YooChun and has gone home.

to be continued.......[/i]
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