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« Reply #15 on: October 06, 2006, 11:58:51 PM »

Chapter 3[/u]

JaeJoong and the other guys made their way to their hyung's private apartment. 'JaeJoong ah? Do you think you should call them first? Who might know they are away?' SungMin told him. JaeJoong looked at SungMin.

'The last time we go there, they're at their parent's place.' SungMin added. 'SungMin is right.' YooChun agreed. 'Fine!' JaeJoong picked up his cell phone and started calling. Before he could dial the number, someone tapped his back.

'What?' Someone kept tapping his back. 'SungMin would you...' He turned and the Black Jacks are back again. 'So, we meet again.' YunHo said. JaeJoong closed his phone. 'Don't tell me this is your territory too?' JaeJoong said and they laughed.

'YunHo ah? We gave them lots of chance. We should teach them a lesson.' KyuHyun said. 'What lesson? We never bring any school books today!' ChangMin joked and the boys laughed.

'That's it!' KyuHyun started his first move and hit JaeJoong. JaeJoong's mates started attacking everyone. Only left YunHo and JaeJoong. They stared at each other giving death glares when they heard a police siren. 'Police!' Both of them said. 'Yah! Guys stop! Let's flee!!!'

All started running away and hide. They managed to hide and RyeoWook came to JaeJoong. 'Are you ok?' JaeJoong nodded and placed his fingers on his lip. 'Yah! You're bleeding!'

'What?' They guys started running towards him. 'Guys! I'm alright!' Then, the Black Jacks came again. 'Yah! We meet again here, tonight! Got it?' YunHo said and they left. 'JaeJoong ah? They want a fight with us.'

'Let them. We'll call our hyungs along.' JaeJoong said, wiping off his blood from his lips.

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'YunHo hyung. Do you think that this fighting scene solve everything?' JunSu asked. 'Why? Are you scared?' JunSu did not say anything. 'YunHo ah? What makes the sudden to fight with them?' KiBum asked. 'What fight?' A guy, who looked like a girl, came.

'HeeChul hyung!' All stood up and greeted him. YunHo sat down thinking. Then, their head leader, KangIn, came.

'What fight are you talking about?' KangIn asked. 'KangIn hyung, YunHo asked the Black Ravens to have a fight with us tonight.'

'Tonight? This will be fun! What makes you want to fight?' KangIn asked. 'Nothing. From the look of that jerk makes me feel irritated and disgusted!' KangIn put his arm around him. 'YunHo ah? I'm proud of what you're doing.'

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'Oppa? Where are you going? Abeoji will know where you are heading!' KyonMin wanted to stop him but he simply ignored her. 'YunHo!' KyonMin always cover him since last year. He's been mixing with those goons for 2 years. She could not even recognise her own twin brother who were used to have fun.

KyonMin changed her clothes and started following YunHo. She tried to hide herself wherever she can. Then, KiBum was there. 'YunHo ah? The Black Ravens are waiting.' YunHo nodded and KyonMin started following them.

KyonMin saw her brother's gang. 'What's up? You guys ready?' KangIn said. KangIn? KyonMin does not know that KangIn was part of them too. The last time KangIn visited her and YunHo was during last year's Christmas. He was smartly dressed.

What other secrets KyonMin did not know? Again, she followed.

Once they reached there, she saw the Black Ravens. She heard, 'So, you also bring your hyungs huh?' YunHo said. 'You too.' KyonMin saw that YunHo's gang were holding metal stick behind their back and some bring the baseball bat.

She could not stand it and ran to them. Before they could do anything, she finally reached to YunHo and faced down. 'STOP!!' There was silence. 'KyonMin?'

'Stay away, KyonMin.' YunHo said, not wanting anyone to hear. He was super pissed and push her aside. KyonMin moved aside but KyonMin blocked his way. 'WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!'

'I DON'T WANT YOU TO GET HURT!!!' YunHo pushed her aside and KiBum went to her. 'It's best not to interfere, KyonMin.' He kissed her cheek and left. KyonMin did not know what is happening.

She could not do anything to stop them. She went back home and was worried about YunHo.


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« Reply #16 on: October 07, 2006, 12:30:55 AM »

oh, thigh, i get it..haha...complicated situation, but go Jaejoong!!!


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« Reply #17 on: October 07, 2006, 07:26:04 PM »

i read the story twice all over again...
In your opinion, do you want me to continue writing or re-edit...
Because i find it confusing too and this really gives me the writer's block...
So... please... i really extremely truely NEED your help...
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« Reply #18 on: October 08, 2006, 11:57:41 AM »

it's cool you should keep writing i understand ur story somehow when other people dont. but u should really continue. it's cool


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« Reply #19 on: October 08, 2006, 04:35:53 PM »

Thanks, aazngurl! I will continue writing... ^^

sorry... no post today... i'll be away because, i'm finding a part-time job... i will try to upload if i have a free time...

Thank you for supporting me... So... this is another fanfic that i made in another forum... You have to register in order to read...I'm very sorry... So... yeah... this is the link...

Timeless... JunSu feat KiBum

Hope you have fun reading... Remember...

You have to log in/register in order to read...


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« Reply #20 on: October 08, 2006, 05:04:02 PM »

i want to read it so bad!!!


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« Reply #21 on: October 08, 2006, 05:24:07 PM »

yay! you'll keep posting. i went on the other thing and registered an account cuz i really wanted to read ur fanfic. it's really cool ! Cheesy


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« Reply #22 on: October 09, 2006, 05:56:30 AM »

Chapter 4

KyonMin was waiting for YunHo. She waited at 9pm.

10pm...

11pm...

12 midnight...

The door was opened and KyonMin was awake. A figure entered inside the house. The figure quietly closed the door. She switched on the table light and she saw YunHo.

'Oppa!' She ran to him and she found that his lips are bleeding and his eyes has been punched badly. 'Oppa? Are you ok?' YunHo did not answer and he went to him room.

She felt so sad. She should have stopped him voilently but she don't have the courage to stop him. She is very afraid of her brother. Besides, today is their 17th birthday.

Oppa forget about it... Happy birthday, oppa.

She looked at her brother walking up to his room. She went to her room and went to bed.

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The next day, KyonMin went to YunHo's room. His clothes are all over the floor. KyonMin quietly went to his bed. 'Oppa?' She shook him. 'Oppa, wake up. It's morning. Time to go to school.'

Suddenly, YunHo pushed her down and she fell down on her bottom. If only my YunHo I used to know is back to me. 'Fine! Sleep here until die! I won't wake you up anymore.' She ran out of the room.

She took her bag and did not eat her breakfast. 'KyonMin ah? Your breakfast!' Her father called but she ignored him. 'Ma'am...' The chauffer said but she just dashed across him.

She walked to school instead, crying.

Flashbacks

'Oppa! Give it back!!!' Little YunHo was playing with little KyonMin's teddy bear. 'I am KyonMin! I am a stupid bear-bear.' Little YunHo said playfully. 'It's not funny! I'm not stupid!'

They are only five years old. Their mother passed away when they were three. In that time, they are the HAPPIEST siblings on earth.

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5 years later... They are 10-years-old.

'YunHo oppa ah? Are you sick?' KyonMin touches his forehead. It was hot. 'That means I have to go to school alone?' She asked and he nodded. 'KyonMin ah? It's time for you to go to school. Your oppa is sick. His sickness might attack you.' One of the maid said.

'Bye, oppa.' She waved to him goodbye.

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Another 5 years later...

They turned 15 years old. They had a very good time. When three sophomores approached to YunHo in the gents during school time, they pulled him in to be part of them. YunHo was the first one who knew that KangIn was part of the gang.

KyonMin did not know anything. A week later, YunHo's attitude changes. KyonMin was extremely curious when she found out that YunHo was mixing around with the sophomores.

The next year, the sophomores in the school have graduated. She was expecting YunHo to change but it was impossible. He has been extremely influenced by the sophomores and gathered up the boys that they knew.

By that time, YunHo and KyonMin are no longer the happiest siblings on earth...

YunHo does not care about her anymore...

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« Reply #23 on: October 09, 2006, 06:26:56 AM »

Chapter 5

KyonMin reached school all by herself. There, she met her classmate, JaeJoong and RyeoWook. They were wearing their sunglasses and they have bruises on the lips.

Suddenly, she bumped into JaeJoong's mate, ChangMin. 'Oops... Sor...'

It was YunHo's enemy.

Look, once the sophomores are gone, I don't want you to mix around with the Black Raven freaks. You got that? YunHo's words rang her mind after the sophomores has gone.

Why should I care about his words? Though KyonMin. She looked at ChangMin. 'I'm sorry. I should have watch where I am going. I'm really sorry.' She bowed and went to her class.

JaeJoong's POV

JaeJoong saw KyonMin walking in the school gate on her own foot. No cars, no guards and no YunHo.

Flashback yesterday night...

JaeJoong wanted to attack YunHo but someone blocked his way.

'STOP!' The girl was facing YunHo. He knew the voice. It was KyonMin's. YunHo whispered to her something. Then, he pushed her aside. Again, she blocked YunHo's way.

'WHAT ARE YOU DOING?' YunHo raised his voice.

'I DON'T WANT YOU TO GET HURT!!!' YunHo pushed her aside and he saw KiBum went to her. JaeJoong was feeling different. What am I feeling right now? Why am I feeling so weird?

When he watched KyonMin under the light, she looked absolute beautiful with her hair let down.

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KyonMin was eyeing on him and RyeoWook. She bumped into ChangMin. JaeJoong was hoping that ChangMin won't do anything to her but he just stood there, his hands on his pocket. JaeJoong heard that she was apologising to ChangMin.

Then she left. JaeJoong saw ChangMin looked down on the ground and lift up the pink book. JaeJoong went to him. 'Yah! What are you doing?'

'The girl dropped this.' ChangMin said. 'I'll take that.' JaeJoong took it away from him. 'We won't be skipping school today.' JaeJoong said. 'What? Then what about our hyungs?' Ryeowook said.

'Look, we skipped a lot for the past two years. Do you think we should be studying?'

'What has gotten into you, JaeJoong?' RyeoWook asked and left with ChangMin.

JaeJoong entered the classroom. He saw KyonMin's bag but no sign of her. He looked everywhere for her and he found her in the art room balcony.

'KyonMin ah?' She wiped away her tears. 'JaeJoong ah? What are you doing here?' She asked. 'You dropped something.' He took out her pink book and passed it to her. 'Are you crying because of this?' JaeJoong asked.

'I'm not a small kid who cry over a pink book.' She said in anger with her sadness tone. JaeJoong walked towards her but she moved away. 'Yah! What are you doing?' A guy called and it was KiBum. 'Stay away from her!'

KiBum pushed JaeJoong aside and hold KyonMin's arm. 'Let me go!'

KyonMin ran away from both of them. 'Is yesterday's fighting not enough for you? We can continue today, you know?' JaeJoong chuckled. 'Do you think that's childish?' JaeJoong said and left the balcony.

He saw KyonMin stood outside the classroom. 'Yah! You want to skip class today?' JaeJoong asked. 'I'm not like you.' JaeJoong smiled. 'You looked miserable. Do you think you can continue studying in this situation?'

JaeJoong asked her and he does have the point. KyonMin went to the classroom and took her bag. 'KyonMin ah? Where are you going?' HeeRin asked and she did not answer her.

HeeRin followed her and saw her walking side by side with JaeJoong. HeeRin went to the another block. 'EeTeuk oppa! We have a situation.' HeeRin said. 'What's the matter?' KiBum asked. 'Where's YunHo?'

'He won't be coming to school. Why?' KiBum asked again. 'JaeJoong took her out of the school.'

'WHAT?!'

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JaeJoong drove his Honda S2000 to the place where he always hang out alone whenever he feel depressed, etc.

He stopped the car. 'Here we are.'

'The beach?' KyonMin asked. 'Yups. It was the most pleasant place to clear things off.' KyonMin laughed. 'What's so funny?' KyonMin continued laughing. 'Yah! What's so freaking funny?'

'I didn... I didn't *laughs* know that someone like you would go this kind of place.' She continued laughing. JaeJoong came close to her without knowing. KyonMin turned and JaeJoong's lips touches hers.


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« Reply #24 on: October 09, 2006, 07:50:42 AM »

aww! wow! i'm reading both ur stories at the same time. they're really kool! hope u post soon! Cheesy


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« Reply #25 on: October 09, 2006, 08:44:56 PM »

Go Jaejoong! Jaejoong foever!! YAY!!! :wink:


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« Reply #26 on: October 10, 2006, 06:05:31 AM »

hope u enjoy this chapter 6!

Chapter 6

KyonMin was frozen, she did not know what to do when the door opened and grabbed JaeJoong's collar. 'Yah! What do you think you are doing?' KiBum grabbed his collar and JaeJoong took out his glasses.

'KiBum ah? What are you doing here?' KyonMin yelled at KiBum. 'I'm here to take you back to school. Even though your brother won't be coming. I am going to take care of you.' Still, he holds JaeJoong's collar.

'To hell with YunHo and let JaeJoong go!' KiBum did not have anything to say. He looked at JaeJoong. 'I'm letting you go this time.' KiBum went to KyonMin and took her hand. 'KiBum! What are you doing? You're hurting me!'

She wanted to break but he's too strong. 'I want to stay with JaeJoong!' Then, he stopped and turned. 'Do you like him or something?' KiBum asked. KyonMin looked at KiBum. He took her hand again and continued walking.

'You're hurting me!!' Someone ran passed her and took her arm away from KiBum. 'JaeJoong ah? Hand KyonMin to me!' KiBum demanded. 'Why should I? You're hurting her!'

KiBum held out his hand. 'KyonMin? Take my hand.' KyonMin looked at his hand. Should I or should not? 'No.' JaeJoong and KiBum was shocked. 'I'm staying with JaeJoong.' She looked at JaeJoong then to KiBum. 'I love him.' JaeJoong stared at KyonMin.

KiBum put down his hand. Deep in his heart, he felt like crying but in the outside, he was furious. 'You... Love him huh?' She nodded. KiBum chuckled. 'Fine...' KiBum walked away and KyonMin was crying. JaeJoong came to her and hug her but she pushed him away. 'I said that doesn't mean I really love you! I'm just using you!'

She shoved him and ran away. 'KyonMin ah?' JaeJoong caught up with her. He grabbed her arm and turned her around. 'Yah! What do you mean you are using me?' KyonMin cried and yelled. 'Are you stupid or something? Do you think that I really love you?' No eye contact with him. I do... Thought JaeJoong.

He let go of her arm and looked somewhere else. He acted, 'So... You're using me?' No response. 'It's the only way to get KiBum away.'

'You want to scream all your troubles away?' KyonMin turned to look at him. 'Let's make our way to the sea.' JaeJoong walked towards the sea. KyonMin followed him. 'Ready?' She nodded. 'In the count of...' Suddenly, she screamed. After screaming her heart out, she shouted, 'I HATE YOU OPPA!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!' She cried.

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'What? She did not say that? -Where is she now?' YunHo asked on the phone. KiBum was on the line. 'Yes she did. -She's at the beach. Wait... They're leaving somewhere.'

'Follow them, then!!!' YunHo hung up his phone and was pissed off. 'Why did she hang out with that low life loser?!' YunHo asked himself, walking around his room, thinking of something.

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JaeJoong stopped the car two blocks away from her house. 'Stop here.' KyonMin said and she went out of his car. 'Thanks for today. I didn't know there's a good heart in you.' She smiled. 'Your welcome.' He smiled at her and drove off.

She walked back to her house.

Once she entered the house, YunHo yelled, 'Where have you been? Why aren't you at school?' KyonMin gave him the death glares. 'What makes you care about me?' KyonMin asked him back. YunHo stared at her with anger. They kept staring and KyonMin left him.

'Yah! Where are you going?' He asked taking her arm. 'Oww!' YunHo quickly let go and lift up her sleeve. It was very red. 'Have you been crying?' YunHo asked. 'What makes you care?'

She ran up to her room. 'Yah!! Stop!' He ran up and blocked her way. 'KiBum told me that you love JaeJoong?' I'm a dead duck! She stared at him. 'I'm asking you this simple question! ARE.YOU.IN.LOVE.WITH.JAEJOONG?'

'Yes! I am in love with him! What's your problem with him? He's a nice guy!' She yelled. 'Nice? A guy like him who's like a devil you call that nice???'

'The devil around here is you! Even though he's like one of you, he has the kind heart. It's just that he won't show to others!' Why am I backing up for JaeJoong? This feeling is very weird. 'You have change, KyonMin.' YunHo said. 'So are you.' She said, gritted her teeth and shoved him away.

YunHo was extremely furious.

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The next day, KyonMin did not wake YunHo up. She woke up early and ate her breakfast. 'Bye, abeoji.' She kissed his cheek. 'Why aren't you waiting for your brother?'

'No point waiting.' She said and quickly leave the house. 'I'll take the bicycle from now on.' KyonMin took her bicycle and started cycling. 'Yah! KyonMin ah?' She pressed her breaks and turned around. 'Oh! HeeRin ah?' She was cycling too. 'First time seeing you cycle to school. What happened to your father's car?' She shrugged.

Once they reached school and wanted to enter, she heard a piano playing. 'HeeRin ah? Can you wait for me? Have... A little business.' She nodded and KyonMin ran towards the sound. She went inside the music room. She saw a medium black hair guy playing the piano and he was singing.

She sat on one of the seats and looked at the person playing. She was smiling to the song. Then, the guy pressed the wrong key and he stopped. 'Yah! Why do you stop? It's nice!' She stood up. The person turned and could not believe who she saw!

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« Reply #27 on: October 10, 2006, 06:40:59 AM »

Enjoy this chap 7!!!

Chapter 7

Both of them stared at each other...

Outside the music room, both of them was leaning against the wall, facing each other. 'You... Played well, JaeJoong.' (I noe currently his hair is blonde... So... yeah...) He smiled, feeling proud. 'And your singing too.' Double the happiness for JaeJoong.

The school bell rang. 'I guess you are skipping school again?' KyonMin asked. He looked at her. 'Yah! JaeJoong ah? Aren't you coming?' RyeoWook asked. 'Uh...' He looked at her again, 'Yeah...' JaeJoong and RyeoWook walked away and meet up with the others.

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JaeJoong and the guys were in the playground. SungMin, DongHae and EunHyuk were vandalising the slides. 'Yah! What are you doing?' YooChun asked. 'Vandalising. Duh!' SungMin said and keep on vandalising.

'Where's HanKyung and ShinDong hyung? We're almost waiting for an hour!!!' ChangMin whinned. 'Relax, ChangMin! HanKyung might stuck on traffic. As for ShinDong...' EunHyuk finishes the sentence for SungMin, 'ShinDong probably stuff his food into his stomach and he walked pretty slow.'

'Yeah... Can't you see the fats inside ShinDong hyung's stomach? It's like he's getting pregnant!' ChangMin laughed alone and the others did not. 'He's behind me, isn't he?' YooChun nodded. 'Pregnant huh?' ChangMin gave him the scared smile and sat beside JaeJoong. ChangMin whispered to him, 'I'm afraid he might sit on me and I'll be his pancake.'

ChangMin was just joking and ShinDong was running after him. 'Yah! What did you say about your hyung???' The guys laughed at the way ShinDong runs.

'ChangMin ah? Why don't you try running around Korea? Help ShinDong hyung to lose some weight!!' SungMin suggested. The guys laughed and gave each other high-fives. 'Ah! There's HanKyung hyung!' YooChun pointed.

ChangMin and ShinDong stopped running. 'ShinDong ah? Since when you started exercising?' HanKyung asked. 'Very funny.' ChangMin laughed. 'JaeJoong ah?' He went to JaeJoong and to DongHae. 'What happened yesterday? RyeoWook told me that you went out with our enemy's sister.'

JaeJoong was busy plucking (sp?) the leaf. 'Yah! I'm talking to you!' He took away the leaf. 'Yeah... What's wrong with that?'

'Yah! You are the leader! You should show some examples who are lower rank than you!' Meaning, his mates. You knew that JaeJoong is the 2nd higher priority in the group. Even though ShinDong is the 2nd eldest, he has to show some respect to JaeJoong too.

'What has gotten into you?' HanKyung asked. 'I'm in love...' All were shocked. 'WHAT?'

'JaeJoong hyung, are you... In love with... her?' RyeoWook asked. 'Then what about you? You like HeeRin too right? You are in love with our enemy's cousin.' Again, they were shocked. 'RYEOWOOK AH?? YOU TOO?!' He shrugged.

HanKyung slaps his head, could not believe about it. 'Oh my god, help me. What has gotten to these lovebirds? We might lose two of our best!' He prayed.

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It's lunchtime. KyonMin and HeeRin were eating their lunch at the foyer. 'My cousin told me that JaeJoong and you are dating?' KyonMin wanted to take a bite but... HeeRin's words snapped her. 'Me? Dating? JaeJoong? *chuckles* What do you think?'

'You weren't in the toilet just now, weren't you?' KyonMin took a bite of her bread. 'You were with JaeJoong outside the music room.' KyonMin did not say anything. 'Yah! I've been looking everywhere for you!' KiBum asked.

KyonMin looked up at KiBum and continue eating. 'YunHo wants to see you.' She acted deaf. 'Who's YunHo? I don't recall by the name of YunHo.' KiBum looked at Eeteuk. 'HeeRin ah? Let's leave them alone.' HeeRin nodded and left KiBum and KyonMin alone.

He sat beside her and took her hand. She slipped away her hand from KiBum. 'Those hands are meant for JaeJoong right?' KyonMin looked at him and looked away. 'None of your business.'

'Funny... JaeJoong and you were together yesterday and he left you here alone. What kind of boyfriend is he anyway?' KiBum said. 'It's still none of your business.' She took her last bite and walked off.

KiBum's thoughts...

KyonMin walked away and he took her arm and pulled her close to him. 'KyonMin ah? Can't you see that I'm worried for you? Don't you get the hint for the past few years? I love you, KyonMin... I love you!'

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He snapped out of it and she was not there.

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« Reply #28 on: October 10, 2006, 01:02:32 PM »

wow! kibum likes her, she sort of likes jaejoong,jaejoong likes her.
wow a triangle!
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« Reply #29 on: October 10, 2006, 02:00:28 PM »

OMG!!! its great.. i would love to read more soon..^^ please post more!!


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