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« Reply #15 on: October 08, 2006, 02:26:04 AM »
i read the story twice all over again...
In your opinion, do you want me to continue writing or re-edit...
Because i find it confusing too and this really gives me the writer's block...
So... please... i really extremely truely NEED your help...
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« Reply #16 on: October 08, 2006, 06:57:41 PM »
it's cool you should keep writing i understand ur story somehow when other people dont. but u should really continue. it's cool
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« Reply #17 on: October 08, 2006, 11:35:53 PM »
Thanks, aazngurl! I will continue writing... ^^

sorry... no post today... i'll be away because, i'm finding a part-time job... i will try to upload if i have a free time...

Thank you for supporting me... So... this is another fanfic that i made in another forum... You have to register in order to read...I'm very sorry... So... yeah... this is the link...

Timeless... JunSu feat KiBum

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« Reply #18 on: October 09, 2006, 12:24:07 AM »
yay! you'll keep posting. i went on the other thing and registered an account cuz i really wanted to read ur fanfic. it's really cool ! :D
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« Reply #19 on: October 09, 2006, 12:56:30 PM »
Chapter 4

KyonMin was waiting for YunHo. She waited at 9pm.

10pm...

11pm...

12 midnight...

The door was opened and KyonMin was awake. A figure entered inside the house. The figure quietly closed the door. She switched on the table light and she saw YunHo.

'Oppa!' She ran to him and she found that his lips are bleeding and his eyes has been punched badly. 'Oppa? Are you ok?' YunHo did not answer and he went to him room.

She felt so sad. She should have stopped him voilently but she don't have the courage to stop him. She is very afraid of her brother. Besides, today is their 17th birthday.

Oppa forget about it... Happy birthday, oppa.

She looked at her brother walking up to his room. She went to her room and went to bed.

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The next day, KyonMin went to YunHo's room. His clothes are all over the floor. KyonMin quietly went to his bed. 'Oppa?' She shook him. 'Oppa, wake up. It's morning. Time to go to school.'

Suddenly, YunHo pushed her down and she fell down on her bottom. If only my YunHo I used to know is back to me. 'Fine! Sleep here until die! I won't wake you up anymore.' She ran out of the room.

She took her bag and did not eat her breakfast. 'KyonMin ah? Your breakfast!' Her father called but she ignored him. 'Ma'am...' The chauffer said but she just dashed across him.

She walked to school instead, crying.

Flashbacks

'Oppa! Give it back!!!' Little YunHo was playing with little KyonMin's teddy bear. 'I am KyonMin! I am a stupid bear-bear.' Little YunHo said playfully. 'It's not funny! I'm not stupid!'

They are only five years old. Their mother passed away when they were three. In that time, they are the HAPPIEST siblings on earth.

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5 years later... They are 10-years-old.

'YunHo oppa ah? Are you sick?' KyonMin touches his forehead. It was hot. 'That means I have to go to school alone?' She asked and he nodded. 'KyonMin ah? It's time for you to go to school. Your oppa is sick. His sickness might attack you.' One of the maid said.

'Bye, oppa.' She waved to him goodbye.

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Another 5 years later...

They turned 15 years old. They had a very good time. When three sophomores approached to YunHo in the gents during school time, they pulled him in to be part of them. YunHo was the first one who knew that KangIn was part of the gang.

KyonMin did not know anything. A week later, YunHo's attitude changes. KyonMin was extremely curious when she found out that YunHo was mixing around with the sophomores.

The next year, the sophomores in the school have graduated. She was expecting YunHo to change but it was impossible. He has been extremely influenced by the sophomores and gathered up the boys that they knew.

By that time, YunHo and KyonMin are no longer the happiest siblings on earth...

YunHo does not care about her anymore...

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« Reply #20 on: October 09, 2006, 01:26:56 PM »
Chapter 5

KyonMin reached school all by herself. There, she met her classmate, JaeJoong and RyeoWook. They were wearing their sunglasses and they have bruises on the lips.

Suddenly, she bumped into JaeJoong's mate, ChangMin. 'Oops... Sor...'

It was YunHo's enemy.

Look, once the sophomores are gone, I don't want you to mix around with the Black Raven freaks. You got that? YunHo's words rang her mind after the sophomores has gone.

Why should I care about his words? Though KyonMin. She looked at ChangMin. 'I'm sorry. I should have watch where I am going. I'm really sorry.' She bowed and went to her class.

JaeJoong's POV

JaeJoong saw KyonMin walking in the school gate on her own foot. No cars, no guards and no YunHo.

Flashback yesterday night...

JaeJoong wanted to attack YunHo but someone blocked his way.

'STOP!' The girl was facing YunHo. He knew the voice. It was KyonMin's. YunHo whispered to her something. Then, he pushed her aside. Again, she blocked YunHo's way.

'WHAT ARE YOU DOING?' YunHo raised his voice.

'I DON'T WANT YOU TO GET HURT!!!' YunHo pushed her aside and he saw KiBum went to her. JaeJoong was feeling different. What am I feeling right now? Why am I feeling so weird?

When he watched KyonMin under the light, she looked absolute beautiful with her hair let down.

END

KyonMin was eyeing on him and RyeoWook. She bumped into ChangMin. JaeJoong was hoping that ChangMin won't do anything to her but he just stood there, his hands on his pocket. JaeJoong heard that she was apologising to ChangMin.

Then she left. JaeJoong saw ChangMin looked down on the ground and lift up the pink book. JaeJoong went to him. 'Yah! What are you doing?'

'The girl dropped this.' ChangMin said. 'I'll take that.' JaeJoong took it away from him. 'We won't be skipping school today.' JaeJoong said. 'What? Then what about our hyungs?' Ryeowook said.

'Look, we skipped a lot for the past two years. Do you think we should be studying?'

'What has gotten into you, JaeJoong?' RyeoWook asked and left with ChangMin.

JaeJoong entered the classroom. He saw KyonMin's bag but no sign of her. He looked everywhere for her and he found her in the art room balcony.

'KyonMin ah?' She wiped away her tears. 'JaeJoong ah? What are you doing here?' She asked. 'You dropped something.' He took out her pink book and passed it to her. 'Are you crying because of this?' JaeJoong asked.

'I'm not a small kid who cry over a pink book.' She said in anger with her sadness tone. JaeJoong walked towards her but she moved away. 'Yah! What are you doing?' A guy called and it was KiBum. 'Stay away from her!'

KiBum pushed JaeJoong aside and hold KyonMin's arm. 'Let me go!'

KyonMin ran away from both of them. 'Is yesterday's fighting not enough for you? We can continue today, you know?' JaeJoong chuckled. 'Do you think that's childish?' JaeJoong said and left the balcony.

He saw KyonMin stood outside the classroom. 'Yah! You want to skip class today?' JaeJoong asked. 'I'm not like you.' JaeJoong smiled. 'You looked miserable. Do you think you can continue studying in this situation?'

JaeJoong asked her and he does have the point. KyonMin went to the classroom and took her bag. 'KyonMin ah? Where are you going?' HeeRin asked and she did not answer her.

HeeRin followed her and saw her walking side by side with JaeJoong. HeeRin went to the another block. 'EeTeuk oppa! We have a situation.' HeeRin said. 'What's the matter?' KiBum asked. 'Where's YunHo?'

'He won't be coming to school. Why?' KiBum asked again. 'JaeJoong took her out of the school.'

'WHAT?!'

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JaeJoong drove his Honda S2000 to the place where he always hang out alone whenever he feel depressed, etc.

He stopped the car. 'Here we are.'

'The beach?' KyonMin asked. 'Yups. It was the most pleasant place to clear things off.' KyonMin laughed. 'What's so funny?' KyonMin continued laughing. 'Yah! What's so freaking funny?'

'I didn... I didn't *laughs* know that someone like you would go this kind of place.' She continued laughing. JaeJoong came close to her without knowing. KyonMin turned and JaeJoong's lips touches hers.
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« Reply #21 on: October 09, 2006, 02:50:42 PM »
aww! wow! i'm reading both ur stories at the same time. they're really kool! hope u post soon! :D
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« Reply #22 on: October 10, 2006, 03:44:56 AM »
Go Jaejoong! Jaejoong foever!! YAY!!! :wink:
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« Reply #23 on: October 10, 2006, 01:05:31 PM »
hope u enjoy this chapter 6!

Chapter 6

KyonMin was frozen, she did not know what to do when the door opened and grabbed JaeJoong's collar. 'Yah! What do you think you are doing?' KiBum grabbed his collar and JaeJoong took out his glasses.

'KiBum ah? What are you doing here?' KyonMin yelled at KiBum. 'I'm here to take you back to school. Even though your brother won't be coming. I am going to take care of you.' Still, he holds JaeJoong's collar.

'To hell with YunHo and let JaeJoong go!' KiBum did not have anything to say. He looked at JaeJoong. 'I'm letting you go this time.' KiBum went to KyonMin and took her hand. 'KiBum! What are you doing? You're hurting me!'

She wanted to break but he's too strong. 'I want to stay with JaeJoong!' Then, he stopped and turned. 'Do you like him or something?' KiBum asked. KyonMin looked at KiBum. He took her hand again and continued walking.

'You're hurting me!!' Someone ran passed her and took her arm away from KiBum. 'JaeJoong ah? Hand KyonMin to me!' KiBum demanded. 'Why should I? You're hurting her!'

KiBum held out his hand. 'KyonMin? Take my hand.' KyonMin looked at his hand. Should I or should not? 'No.' JaeJoong and KiBum was shocked. 'I'm staying with JaeJoong.' She looked at JaeJoong then to KiBum. 'I love him.' JaeJoong stared at KyonMin.

KiBum put down his hand. Deep in his heart, he felt like crying but in the outside, he was furious. 'You... Love him huh?' She nodded. KiBum chuckled. 'Fine...' KiBum walked away and KyonMin was crying. JaeJoong came to her and hug her but she pushed him away. 'I said that doesn't mean I really love you! I'm just using you!'

She shoved him and ran away. 'KyonMin ah?' JaeJoong caught up with her. He grabbed her arm and turned her around. 'Yah! What do you mean you are using me?' KyonMin cried and yelled. 'Are you stupid or something? Do you think that I really love you?' No eye contact with him. I do... Thought JaeJoong.

He let go of her arm and looked somewhere else. He acted, 'So... You're using me?' No response. 'It's the only way to get KiBum away.'

'You want to scream all your troubles away?' KyonMin turned to look at him. 'Let's make our way to the sea.' JaeJoong walked towards the sea. KyonMin followed him. 'Ready?' She nodded. 'In the count of...' Suddenly, she screamed. After screaming her heart out, she shouted, 'I HATE YOU OPPA!!! I HATE YOU!!!!!' She cried.

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'What? She did not say that? -Where is she now?' YunHo asked on the phone. KiBum was on the line. 'Yes she did. -She's at the beach. Wait... They're leaving somewhere.'

'Follow them, then!!!' YunHo hung up his phone and was pissed off. 'Why did she hang out with that low life loser?!' YunHo asked himself, walking around his room, thinking of something.

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JaeJoong stopped the car two blocks away from her house. 'Stop here.' KyonMin said and she went out of his car. 'Thanks for today. I didn't know there's a good heart in you.' She smiled. 'Your welcome.' He smiled at her and drove off.

She walked back to her house.

Once she entered the house, YunHo yelled, 'Where have you been? Why aren't you at school?' KyonMin gave him the death glares. 'What makes you care about me?' KyonMin asked him back. YunHo stared at her with anger. They kept staring and KyonMin left him.

'Yah! Where are you going?' He asked taking her arm. 'Oww!' YunHo quickly let go and lift up her sleeve. It was very red. 'Have you been crying?' YunHo asked. 'What makes you care?'

She ran up to her room. 'Yah!! Stop!' He ran up and blocked her way. 'KiBum told me that you love JaeJoong?' I'm a dead duck! She stared at him. 'I'm asking you this simple question! ARE.YOU.IN.LOVE.WITH.JAEJOONG?'

'Yes! I am in love with him! What's your problem with him? He's a nice guy!' She yelled. 'Nice? A guy like him who's like a devil you call that nice???'

'The devil around here is you! Even though he's like one of you, he has the kind heart. It's just that he won't show to others!' Why am I backing up for JaeJoong? This feeling is very weird. 'You have change, KyonMin.' YunHo said. 'So are you.' She said, gritted her teeth and shoved him away.

YunHo was extremely furious.

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The next day, KyonMin did not wake YunHo up. She woke up early and ate her breakfast. 'Bye, abeoji.' She kissed his cheek. 'Why aren't you waiting for your brother?'

'No point waiting.' She said and quickly leave the house. 'I'll take the bicycle from now on.' KyonMin took her bicycle and started cycling. 'Yah! KyonMin ah?' She pressed her breaks and turned around. 'Oh! HeeRin ah?' She was cycling too. 'First time seeing you cycle to school. What happened to your father's car?' She shrugged.

Once they reached school and wanted to enter, she heard a piano playing. 'HeeRin ah? Can you wait for me? Have... A little business.' She nodded and KyonMin ran towards the sound. She went inside the music room. She saw a medium black hair guy playing the piano and he was singing.

She sat on one of the seats and looked at the person playing. She was smiling to the song. Then, the guy pressed the wrong key and he stopped. 'Yah! Why do you stop? It's nice!' She stood up. The person turned and could not believe who she saw!

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« Reply #24 on: October 10, 2006, 01:40:59 PM »
Enjoy this chap 7!!!

Chapter 7

Both of them stared at each other...

Outside the music room, both of them was leaning against the wall, facing each other. 'You... Played well, JaeJoong.' (I noe currently his hair is blonde... So... yeah...) He smiled, feeling proud. 'And your singing too.' Double the happiness for JaeJoong.

The school bell rang. 'I guess you are skipping school again?' KyonMin asked. He looked at her. 'Yah! JaeJoong ah? Aren't you coming?' RyeoWook asked. 'Uh...' He looked at her again, 'Yeah...' JaeJoong and RyeoWook walked away and meet up with the others.

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JaeJoong and the guys were in the playground. SungMin, DongHae and EunHyuk were vandalising the slides. 'Yah! What are you doing?' YooChun asked. 'Vandalising. Duh!' SungMin said and keep on vandalising.

'Where's HanKyung and ShinDong hyung? We're almost waiting for an hour!!!' ChangMin whinned. 'Relax, ChangMin! HanKyung might stuck on traffic. As for ShinDong...' EunHyuk finishes the sentence for SungMin, 'ShinDong probably stuff his food into his stomach and he walked pretty slow.'

'Yeah... Can't you see the fats inside ShinDong hyung's stomach? It's like he's getting pregnant!' ChangMin laughed alone and the others did not. 'He's behind me, isn't he?' YooChun nodded. 'Pregnant huh?' ChangMin gave him the scared smile and sat beside JaeJoong. ChangMin whispered to him, 'I'm afraid he might sit on me and I'll be his pancake.'

ChangMin was just joking and ShinDong was running after him. 'Yah! What did you say about your hyung???' The guys laughed at the way ShinDong runs.

'ChangMin ah? Why don't you try running around Korea? Help ShinDong hyung to lose some weight!!' SungMin suggested. The guys laughed and gave each other high-fives. 'Ah! There's HanKyung hyung!' YooChun pointed.

ChangMin and ShinDong stopped running. 'ShinDong ah? Since when you started exercising?' HanKyung asked. 'Very funny.' ChangMin laughed. 'JaeJoong ah?' He went to JaeJoong and to DongHae. 'What happened yesterday? RyeoWook told me that you went out with our enemy's sister.'

JaeJoong was busy plucking (sp?) the leaf. 'Yah! I'm talking to you!' He took away the leaf. 'Yeah... What's wrong with that?'

'Yah! You are the leader! You should show some examples who are lower rank than you!' Meaning, his mates. You knew that JaeJoong is the 2nd higher priority in the group. Even though ShinDong is the 2nd eldest, he has to show some respect to JaeJoong too.

'What has gotten into you?' HanKyung asked. 'I'm in love...' All were shocked. 'WHAT?'

'JaeJoong hyung, are you... In love with... her?' RyeoWook asked. 'Then what about you? You like HeeRin too right? You are in love with our enemy's cousin.' Again, they were shocked. 'RYEOWOOK AH?? YOU TOO?!' He shrugged.

HanKyung slaps his head, could not believe about it. 'Oh my god, help me. What has gotten to these lovebirds? We might lose two of our best!' He prayed.

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It's lunchtime. KyonMin and HeeRin were eating their lunch at the foyer. 'My cousin told me that JaeJoong and you are dating?' KyonMin wanted to take a bite but... HeeRin's words snapped her. 'Me? Dating? JaeJoong? *chuckles* What do you think?'

'You weren't in the toilet just now, weren't you?' KyonMin took a bite of her bread. 'You were with JaeJoong outside the music room.' KyonMin did not say anything. 'Yah! I've been looking everywhere for you!' KiBum asked.

KyonMin looked up at KiBum and continue eating. 'YunHo wants to see you.' She acted deaf. 'Who's YunHo? I don't recall by the name of YunHo.' KiBum looked at Eeteuk. 'HeeRin ah? Let's leave them alone.' HeeRin nodded and left KiBum and KyonMin alone.

He sat beside her and took her hand. She slipped away her hand from KiBum. 'Those hands are meant for JaeJoong right?' KyonMin looked at him and looked away. 'None of your business.'

'Funny... JaeJoong and you were together yesterday and he left you here alone. What kind of boyfriend is he anyway?' KiBum said. 'It's still none of your business.' She took her last bite and walked off.

KiBum's thoughts...

KyonMin walked away and he took her arm and pulled her close to him. 'KyonMin ah? Can't you see that I'm worried for you? Don't you get the hint for the past few years? I love you, KyonMin... I love you!'

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He snapped out of it and she was not there.

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« Reply #25 on: October 10, 2006, 08:02:32 PM »
wow! kibum likes her, she sort of likes jaejoong,jaejoong likes her.
wow a triangle!
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« Reply #26 on: October 11, 2006, 07:51:36 AM »
I love Jaejoong! So uh...go Jaejoong!

P.S...Great chapters!!!
P.P.S I love Kibum too! Go Kibum!!!
P.P.P.S I love Jaejoong more!!! So go Jaejoong!!! ^^
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« Reply #27 on: October 12, 2006, 02:27:19 AM »
hey! please excuse me with some errors i made... hope u enjoy this chap![/b]

Chapter 8[/u]

After lunch, YunHo was waiting for KyonMin outside her classroom. She went out the classroom, without knowing that YunHo was outside her class. He grabbed her hand. 'Yah! Who are... YunHo ah?'

'Where's your boyfriend?' He asked. 'Oh... YunHo oppa. Bye, KyonMin.' YunHo was still holding her arm. 'Let go of me! You're hurting my hand!' She tried to struggle her hand out but it's too painful.

'I'm asking you! Where is JaeJoong?' She looked at him. 'Like I know where he is now?' He pulled her outside the school, dragging her. 'Get in the car!' YunHo commanded. 'My bike!' He looked at her bike. 'To hell with it.'

YunHo drove his car to search for JaeJoong. He passed by the playground and KyonMin saw them but YunHo did not. She was very relieved. He turned to the left and park his car. 'Where are we going?' She asked. 'Come out of the car.' She did what he told her to do. He took her arm and head towards the playground.

He knew? 'Yah!' JaeJoong's gang get out from the playground and stand on their feet. 'What are you doing here? We've already settle this matter yesterday!' HanKyung said and JaeJoong noticed that YunHo was hurting KyonMin.

'I want to borrow JaeJoong for awhile.' YunHo said as calm as he can. HanKyung looked at JaeJoong. YunHo let go of her. 'I don't want any interference from either one of you. Including you, KyonMin.' YunHo ordered and brought JaeJoong somewhere else.

YunHo & JaeJoong

YunHo started grabbing JaeJoong's collar. 'Yah! You think I wouldn't know that you and my sister were having an affair? Listen here, punk! Stay away from her. This will be my last warning to you.' JaeJoong and YunHo gave each other death glares.

'No matter how much you want to separate me and your sister, my love will always be with her.' JaeJoong smirked. 'You!' YunHo wanted to punch him but KyonMin stopped him. 'YunHo!'

'KyonMin! I told you not to interupt! Why are you being so stubborn?' YunHo said, in his punching position. KyonMin went to YunHo. 'From now onwards, I declare that I am no longer your sister.' She said. YunHo let go of JaeJoong's collar and put his hand down. KyonMin took JaeJoong's arm and walked away.

Original...

Then, she let go of his arm and she cried. JaeJoong wanted to comfort her. 'Stop where you are! Don't come near me. Don't even bother to comfort me.' She ran away, leaving JaeJoong.

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'Yah! It's JaeJoong!' SungMin pointed and all went to him. 'Anything happen to you, bud?' HanKyung asked. He shook his head. 'She dumped me.' He lied. 'Really? That's a great news! Finally... I can depend on him again! Thanks, god!' HanKyung said.

'RyeoWook, same goes to you. Better forget that... HeeRin girl.' He nodded.

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The next day, KyonMin went to school all by herself again. 'KyonMin ah? Where's your bike?' She did not say anything. 'Yah!' Again, she ignored her and continue walking. 'What's wrong with this girl?' HeeRin asked herself.

When they reached school, she did not see RyeoWook and JaeJoong anywhere. Every morning, they would come and disturb HeeRin and KyonMin. 'Ok class! There will be a test tomorrow! Don't forget to study!' All whinned. 'Why they always do this every year?' A student said.

Throughout the school time, she did make any conversation with anyone. She took her bicycle and cycled her way home. Then, she saw KiBum. She stopped. He didn't attend school either? She took a look at him. KiBum went towards her.

'Did you cry throughout the day?' She did not say anything and kept staring at him. 'None of your business.' She said, finally! She cycled but he stopped her. 'Yah! I have some news for you. Bad news I mean.'

'What you want to tell me?' She asked. 'Your father... Is in hospital. He met an accident on his way to work.' She was shocked. 'Let me drive you there.' She left her bike and went inside his car.

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'Abeoji!' She saw YunHo and pretend she didn't know him. 'Abeoji.'

'He's resting.' She looked at him. 'He's having a coma.' KyonMin sat on the couch across the room. YunHo sat beside her. 'I'm sorry. Will you be my sister again, please?'

'With one condition.' She said. 'What is it?'

'I don't want you mixing around with those boys.' YunHo was speechless. 'KyonMin ah? It's not easy doing that!'

'Why not?' She asked. 'In order to quit, I either get beaten or pay them or... both.'
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« Reply #28 on: October 12, 2006, 03:15:07 AM »
sorry this is crappy!!! I was mega bored... lol...

Chapter 9[/u]

'YunHo ah? Just tell KangIn oppa that abeoji knew about it! Surely he will let you off without doing anything!' YunHo looked at her. 'How do you know about KangIn hyung?'

'Do you still remember that day you fought with the Black Ravens? I saw KangIn oppa.' She saw him!

'Oppa... YunHo ah?' She stood up. 'If you won't do that, I will do it.' She left the room and KiBum was outside. 'KiBum ah? Where's KangIn oppa?' He looked at her. 'Who's KangIn?' He pretended that he did not know. 'Don't act dumb with me. I know he's the leader.' She stared at him like lightning.

'Oh... Ok...' KiBum drove her to KangIn's private appartment. He knocked on the door. 'KiBum? You're here... KyonMin? What are you doing here?'

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KyonMin went in with KiBum and sat on the couch. 'KangIn oppa. Both of us are relatives and I think you should... Let YunHo oppa out of the gang member.'

'What?' KangIn stood up. 'No! Even though he's my cousin, I won't let him off because he's the 2nd leader! I won't allow that. I will allow him off after graduation. Fair?'

'But... Oppa... He did not study anything! If abeoji knew about this, he'll be sent straight to boarding school! I don't want to lose another family member.' KyonMin said. 'KyonMin, KyonMin. Haven't you forgotten? My abeoji owned that school! He could do anything he wants! He can tell off the teachers and the principal!'

KyonMin looked down. 'KangIn oppa... You may think that I only knew about this but I knew a lot. If you won't let YunHo off, I will report this to abeoji and yours.' She threatened him. 'KyonMin... Before I lose my temper, get out of my appartment.' Suddenly, someone pressed the doorbell and KiBum answered the door.

'YunHo hyung.'

'KangIn hyung! I'm so sorry about KyonMin.' YunHo rushed in. 'YunHo, bring your sister away from my face.' He ordered. 'KiBum, get her out of here.' He nodded and led her out. She made her way out and went in again. 'Look, I trade you with YunHo.'

'KyonMin ah?' YunHo said. 'I will take over YunHo's place and let him off!'

'Sorry... I don't take girls to be in the group.' KangIn stood up and YunHo followed him. 'Get her out of here quick.' YunHo ordered.

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JaeJoong

JaeJoong was at home, Don't come near me. Don't even bother to comfort me. He was lying on his bed. 'JaeJoong ah? RyeoWook is on the line.' He went to his table and picked up the phone.

Phone conversation::
JJ: Hello?
RW: JaeJoong ah? Can you come out? I'm outside the house!
JJ: (made his way to the window and saw Ryeowook waving...)
END

JaeJoong went down. 'What you want?' RyeoWook looked to his left and he followed. 'Eunhyuk? What are you doing here?' He came to him. 'It's about KyonMin.'

'What do you know about KyonMin?' JaeJoong asked. 'She's my cousin.'

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'KyonMin's family and mine were fighting about my late grandfather's death insurance. My father has the right to control it since my father is the eldest in the family but KyonMin's father thought that my abeoji is greedy. There's a huge misunderstanding. Even though YunHo and I are enemies, KyonMin still in contact with me.'

'But... All these years and days, why we didn't we see you talking to her?' EunHyuk smiled. 'Because we kept this a low profile. Actually, JaeJoong and her weren't dating.' RyeoWook looked at JaeJoong. 'So... She's using him?' EunHyuk nodded. 'Just to get revenge on her brother.' EunHyuk added.

'Ok... This is confusing...' RyeoWook was really confuse about it. But JaeJoong understood him. 'I know you're in love with her, JaeJoong. She told me that even though you are the leader, you have a great heart.' JaeJoong smiled.

'She also told me that, whenever you're with her, she felt weird stuff. Plus, she felt relieved. She made a terrible mistake by saying you're not allow to see her or talk to her.' JaeJoong nodded. 'Where is she?' EunHyuk shrugged.

'I've got to find her.' JaeJoong took his jacket and his car keys.
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« Reply #29 on: October 12, 2006, 08:03:07 PM »
OMG!!! this is sooo cool!
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