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Reiyoku

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« on: July 14, 2005, 01:42:45 AM »
No exactly a fanfiction but i poem i just wrote^^
The endings a little corny though-.-
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My Carefree World

By: Ryan Song

 

I have always wondered,

If it was ever possible.

You know, not to worry or doubt.

Is it really likely?

A place where you aren’t sold out.

 

A place where you never forget,

When something’s on your mind.

A place where your questions are answered,

And your friends are all fine.

 

I only find it in my dreams,

Where “worry” and “burden” don’t even exist.

A place where I can be at ease,

That place where you’ll never be pissed.

 

I’m a big Addidas fan you know,

With their motto, “Impossible is Nothing”.

But is everything really possible?

How about my Carefree World?

 

I doubt it though…

We first have to find peace.

Not only in the world,

But down in the streets.

 

In my eyes, true peace will never exist.

As long as those guns exist,

As long as even the word “violence” continues.

It is no more then my Carefree World.

 

A lot of us hope,

Don’t get me wrong, I do too!

But think of it for once,

Will you ever feel truly well?

 

That’s why my Carefree World exists!

It may not be real, or impossible from reality.

But in the world of my dreams,

It’s that place.

 

Oh how I wish it could be true,

It would be great wouldn’t it?

Where peace is everlasting,

And my homework isn’t due.

 

I know you would love that too.

But it’s no more then vision to me,

‘Cause I know it will never be true.

It will only start happening,

If a man ever flew.


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« Reply #1 on: July 14, 2005, 04:53:24 PM »
^^;hehehe
Thank youz so much

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« Reply #2 on: July 15, 2005, 02:56:45 PM »
me??
Ummmmmmm
I'm tall dark, handsome...ummmmm
Lol
scratch that thought.
I'm 5'9, 8th grade, pretty tan for a korean. I love sports hockey being my favourite...Um I like school, dont find work to hard. I also have an hobby for drawing manga-style art but im not that great^^;
annddd
Oh yah I love music and I where my SAnfransisco 49ers hat everywhere along with my headphones

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« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2005, 02:46:01 PM »
lol^^I dont write to many poems.
I had one for a project i did but thats about it^^;
This just popped into my mind^^;

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« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2005, 10:21:30 PM »
Lol thank you^^
Maybe schoolwork?
I did pretty well in L.A this year^^

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« Reply #5 on: July 18, 2005, 03:13:42 AM »
lol dis inspires me to write my own poem! ......that...... n now i wont be alone if i write a poem in a fanfic section!! :roll: ==" kekeke

anywho good poem~


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« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2005, 12:44:49 PM »
Im going to grade 8 next year^^

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« Reply #7 on: July 19, 2005, 02:03:13 PM »
aha
^^;

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« Reply #8 on: July 19, 2005, 09:54:22 PM »
O.O amazinggg. it isnt corny at all!~ the ending is just...gewd :]. WOW. your like...so tall. T_T im so short and pudgy...4 feet, 11 1/2 inches. T_T i hafta grow taller! btw wuts ur korean name? mine is like...weird :-[

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« Reply #9 on: July 19, 2005, 11:40:45 PM »
Lol it can't be too bad^^
You have to be proud of your name.
Mines
송영우
song young oo

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« Reply #10 on: July 20, 2005, 10:32:53 PM »
i love ur name~ your so original u know that? you have an original bday and name and stuff ^^.~

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« Reply #11 on: July 21, 2005, 06:39:52 PM »
ahahaha^^;
You tooo
lol

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« Reply #12 on: July 21, 2005, 08:08:51 PM »
nahhh my bdays not that special. but 3 is my fav. number and 3/3 is wen i was born. :D so i guess thats cool. i might try to update soon. i have a writers block tho.

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« Reply #13 on: July 22, 2005, 01:36:11 PM »
lol
4's my favourite number^^

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« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2005, 02:46:28 PM »
lol cool! one number above mine :]

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