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« Reply #75 on: June 29, 2005, 06:23:26 PM »
:O what's gonna happen to hanbin?! that other person from the chapter 13 is a real b*tch. xP. hope hanbin is ok.

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« Reply #76 on: June 30, 2005, 06:46:42 PM »
yaaya new chappie !!

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« Reply #77 on: July 02, 2005, 01:01:21 AM »
thanx everybodi, here's a new chapter

Chapter 15

“Argh my head…” says HanBin as he turns to the driver’s seat “Hey, you okay?”

“Yeah, I’m alright” says his assistant

“Argh, “ HanBin says again as he gets out of the car stumbling. People begin to crowd around. He begins to walk away from the car then…

”HanBin!” yells MiHyun

He stops

“Damn….” He whisper quietly then turns around

“It is you…HanBin!” she yells and runs over and hugs him “I though I’d lost you”

“Get…off me…” HanBin says with a hard tone

MiHyun eyes then widen, she looks up at him

“What?” she asks

“The HanBin you know….is gone” he says as he shoves her off

“HanBin!” she yells

He begins to walk away, then he stops.

*Cough cough…*

He puts whips his hand over his mouth and looks at it….blood.

“Damn…” he says as he stumbles to the ground

“HanBin!” MiHyun yells, she runs over to him. She takes out her cell and calls for the hospital

As this happens, TaeWon is behind them…looking…

“Damn…this can’t be happening” he says,

His cell phone rings…

“Hello?” he asks

“What!?” he yells

“When…damn..” he says

He hangs up and runs to MiHyun and grabs her arm.

“MiHyun, we have to go” he says

“Let go of me” she says

“We have to go” he says again

“I’d said…let go!” she yells as she swings arm, being released from his grip

She begins to cry…

“Mi…MiHyun, I’m sorry to rush you but…” he says “It’s your dad”

She stops crying and looks up to TaeWon.

“What?!” MiHyun asks confused

TaeWon sighs

“He’s in the hospital, he’s very ill. The doctors…” he says

“The doctors what?” MiHyun asks

He sighs again

“The doctors say that…he…won’t live long” he says

“What!” she yells

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« Reply #78 on: July 02, 2005, 01:15:34 AM »
Chapter 16

Just then, the ambulance arrives, they take HanBin.

“Come on MiHyun, we have to go see your dad” TaeWon says again

“But…HanBin” she says

“It’s your father!” he yells “He’s dying, now come on!”

He extends his hand towards her. She stalls first, but reluctantly grabs his hand.

*An hour later…MiHyun arrives at the hospital where her father is*

“Dad, dad, are you alright?” she says

He opens his eyes

“Cough…cough…don’t worry hun, I’m alright” JinHyun says weakily
He looks to TaeWon

“TaeWon, can’t…cough cough…leave the room?” JinHyun asks “I have to tell MiHyun something”

“Alright” says TaeWon, he leaves the room

“What is it that you wanted to tell me dad?” MiHyun asks

“Now MiHyun, please forgive me for what I’m about to tell you” he says

MiHyun gets a confused look on her face.

“HanBin, I knew that he was alive…cough cough” he says

MiHyun eyes widen at the sudden news of this

“Wh…what?” she asks perplexed

“Ten years ago…cough cough…HanBin made me promise not to tell you” he says “But now that I’m on my deathbed, I can’t live with lying to you anymore.”

“Dad…what are you talking about?” she asks again

“HanBin made tell you that he died, but in fact, he was very much alive” JinHyun says “He wanted you to marry and be better off.”

“Dad…how could you not tell me?” she says

He coughs very hardier now…

“There’s more…TaeWon…” he says

“TaeWon what?” she asks

He riches inside his shirt slowly and weakly pulls out a letter and gives it to MiHyun.

“Dad, what is this?” she asks

“That was HanBin letter that he wanted to me to give to you” JinHyun says “But TaeWon feared that you’ll be miserable forever, so he made not to give it to you…read it”

She opens the letter and begins reading to herself, HanBin voices replaces her voice

“MiHyun, if your reading this…then I’m longer with you. Please don’t be sad for my death. Continue your life…marry TaeWon, be happy. I’m in a better place now, so don’t be afraid. I will always be watching over you. So please, I beg of you…forgive me…and forget me. Good bye MiHyun, good bye…I love you.”

                  HanBin

Tears begin to falls from her eyes

“MiHyun…please forgive this old fool” JinHyun says “Argh…” He begins to breath heavily

“Dad…dad, what’s wrong?” she yells “Nurse, nurse!!!”

The nurse comes in, just then, JinHyun stops moving and his eyes close. The nurse checks his pulse. She turns her head a little to MiHyun then turns back. She grabs the sheets and put it over his head.

“No…no…dad….no!” she yells

“No MiHyun” TaeWon says as he grabs her and begins to pull her out that room.

“Dad no!!!” she yells again crying “I forgive you!!!”

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« Reply #79 on: July 02, 2005, 11:34:31 AM »
yaaaaaaaaay 2 more chappie^^ cool!! keep posting soon!!
cant wait!!
i'll read it when i'm awake!! -_-

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« Reply #80 on: July 02, 2005, 06:31:50 PM »
heres the final chapter of this fanfic i've written, its the longest of all the chapters, i hope u'll enjoy it

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« Reply #81 on: July 02, 2005, 06:39:59 PM »
Finale

“MiHyun, are you okay?” a worried TaeWon asks

MiHyun cry and then looks up give TaeWon the coldest look.

“Sniff…sniff, why didn’t you tell me?” she says

TaeWon raises an eyebrow.

“What?” he asks

“The letter, HanBin left me a letter, why did you tell my father to hid it from me?” she asks

TaeWon shrunken shock, he sighs

“Because I didn’t want you to…be sad and remember him” he says “MiHyun please understand, I did it for…”

MiHyun slaps him in the face.

“Shut up, no more of your lies” she says

MiHyun begins to walk backwards

“Stay away from…your nothing but a liar to me!” she yells

She turns and runs away…

One week later, after MiHyun visits HanBin in hospital, only to discover to that he has left. She spent the next few days trying to find him. She eventually succeeds, she finds him where it all began...

“HanBin” says MiHyun

HanBin turns around

“Very smart of you to look for me here” he says

“Well…go figure” she says

“I see” he says “I told you to stay away from”

“When I thought you had died, a part of me died” she says “But now…knowing your alive, it can heal again”

“Don’t you have a husband to go to?” HanBin asks

“He lied to me, he told my father to hide the letter you gave to him” she says

“Still…stay away from me…I…don’t love you anymore” he says with a cold voice

First, MiHyun eyes are stricken with grief, then it fades away and she starts to giggle. HanBin becomes confused and turns around.

“MiHyun…you’ve lost it” he says

“HanBin, I’m the one who knows you the best” she says “If you say you don’t love me anymore…then why are you here, where our first date was?

Her smile widens…

“Oh crap…” he whispers

“What was that?” MiHyun says

Then…TaeWon appears

“I’ve finally found you” he says

MiHyun and HanBin both turn around.

“MiHyun, come over here” he says

“No, stay the hell away from me!” she yells

He takes out a gun. HanBin sees and immediately run in front of MiHyun.

“Don’t you dare you b******” HanBin says

TaeWon starts to chuckle.

“Hehe, don’t worry, I’m not gonna hurt MiHyun” he says “I’m here to finish what I started, to kill you…HanBin!”

“What the hell are you talking?” HanBin asks

TaeWon begins to laugh manically.

“Don’t you remember?” he asks “Ten years ago”

“Ten years ago…wait a minute” HanBin says “You’re the one, you the one who shot MiHyun!!!”

MiHyun eyes widen

“Not entirely true, I ordered the hit” he says “I never wanted MiHyun to get hurt at all, that was your fault…and MiHyun’s father’s also”

MiHyun pushes HanBin out of the way.

“What do you mean my father’s fault?”

TaeWon smiles again

“I’ll tell you” he says “It all started…”

*Flashback*

“Where’s the money!!!” this voice yells

“I’m sorry, business has been slow and…” says another voice

“You listen to me JinHyun, you better get me the money” the voice says

“I’m sorry, please, give me more time Mr. Park” JinHyun says

“No…no more, give me the money or else” Park says

“Please, give me more time” he says “I’ll do anything you ask”

“Mmmm…now that you mention it, there’s something you can do for me” Park says

“What?” he asks “What is it, I’ll do anything”

“My son…TaeWon, he’s been…fancying your daughter” Park says “You catch my drift?”

“No…I can’t do that, she’s my daughter!” JinHyun says “Please, she’s my daughter”

“Shut up!” says Park “If I cared for your sentiment, I would have asked for it, and besides, if you don’t give me the money, we were going after your daughter anyways…got it?”

JinHyun gulps

“But…she loves someone, I can’t do that to her” he says

“You leave that to me” a person says as he walks out the shadow, it was TaeWon

*Flashback Ends*

“You see, I wanted you dead, so MiHyun would be all mine” TaeWon says

“So all this time…all this time…you’ve been lying to me” she says

TaeWon chuckles

“You gotta do, what you gotta do” he says “Now get in the car…the both of you!!!”

HanBin and MiHyun both gets into the limo, followed by TaeWon. HanBin and MiHyun both seat next to each other but on the other side of the limo with TaeWon in the opposite seat aiming the gun at HanBin.

“Don’t try anything stupid, or your love HanBin gets it” TaeWon says

“Where are you taking us TaeWon?” MiHyun asks

“Oh you’ll see…you’ll see” TaeWon says with a smile

Just then, a loud car honk from the other lane startles TaeWon and he loses focus. HanBin then quickly reaches for the gun. HanBin and TaeWon both battle for the gun while MiHyun helplessly watches. Then, the gun is pulled, but the gun was aimed at the limo driver, its heads him in the head and he dies. Then another gunshot made, TaeWon shoots HanBin in the stomach and pushes him back to MiHyun. He’s about to fire the final shot when a very loud truck horn is heard. The limo has stopped in the middle of the road and the truck driver can’t stop. HanBin quickly uses himself as a shield for MiHyun. The truck smashes into the limo and cuts it in half. TaeWon is shot out flying and flies into the window of a building and dies. While MiHyun is unharmed thanks to HanBin, but a sharp metal broke off from the limo stabs HanBin in the back. The car halts to a stop.

“HanBin!” MiHyun yells

She shakes him

“No…no…HanBin…wake up!!!” she yells “HanBin!!!”

*1 hour later*

HanBin is at the hospital while MiHyun waits outside the waiting room.

*2 hours later*

The nurse comes out. MiHyun rushes to her.

“Is he gonna be alright?” she asks

The nurse sighs

“We were able to successfully remove the bullet…but” the nurse says

“But…what?” MiHyun asks

“I’m sorry, but the piece of metal…it pierced his heart…he’s won’t last the night”

“No…no…no!!!” MiHyun yells

She starts to cry.

“HanBin…no…” she cries

The nurse puts her hand on MiHyun’s shoulders but then she was called off and left.

“Sniff…sniff…it seems I have no choice” MiHyun says

She walks to HanBin’s room and looks at him from the window. She puts her hand on the window and say.

“I love you HanBin” she says as she begins to write a letter

*30 minutes later*

Doctors found MiHyun outside HanBin’s room…dead. She had taken poison with a note on her that reads.

“Use me as your donor, I’m a perfect match for him. But please, when he wakes up…please give me this letter”

*2 weeks later*

HanBin finally wakes up and sees the sun shining.

“I’m alive…but…how?” he asks to himself

A nurse the comes in

“Oh, you’re finally awake” she says

She begins to examine him.
“Uh…excuse me ms.” HanBin asks “Is there woman by the name of MiHyun waiting for me?”

“Oh…you’re…him” she says

“What are you talking about?” he asks

“Give me a second” she says

She walks out the room then comes back in with a letter and hands it to HanBin.

“She…wanted to give this to you, I’m sorry” she says then leaves to give him privacy.

“What’s she talking about?” HanBin asks as he opens the letter

*MiHyun voice replaces HanBin’s voice*

“If you’re reading this, then I’m no longer with you. I’ve have taken poison…to save you. Please, I’ve read your letter and I know that if this was you. You’ll want me to be happy and find someone. So please, do that HanBin, for me. I don’t want you to be hurt because of me. Just remember this…if you ever miss me, just inside yourself. I love you and you have my heart, and will always have my heart. No one else can take it. So please, be happy…be at peace. I love you HanBin. Til we meet again…in heaven.

                     MiHyun

HanBin stunned with grief, his hands begin to shake as he puts down the letter. He says nothing for minutes then he begins to talk.

“Mi…MiHyun…no…MiHyun…no” he says

*Screen turns black*

Another voice is then heard

“Good bye HanBin”

followed by

“No!!!!”

“MiHyun!!!”

The End

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« Reply #82 on: July 02, 2005, 06:46:45 PM »
So ends the my first fanfic, hope ya liked it. I also got a new idea and i'm planning to write it for the fun of it. Names of characters haven't been chosen yet so i'll make a give a preview of it wen i'm done.

Title: Legend of the Thousand Year Cherry Blossom

P.S. if anyone wants to suggest names, please do so. i need some guys and gurls korean names, thanx

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« Reply #83 on: July 03, 2005, 08:20:51 AM »
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :'( :'( :'(

WHY 'S THE END!! T_T

i'm going 2 read it later!!

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« Reply #84 on: July 03, 2005, 07:35:50 PM »
nooooooooooooo!! but it was such a good ending too T_T. youre a good writer. cant wait until you post another fanfic ^^

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« Reply #85 on: July 04, 2005, 10:19:24 AM »
i read the fic yesgterday!! i cried!!ahhhh!!
but it was anice ending ^ like wat she said!!
nice fic!!


post ur new fic soon lolz!!

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« Reply #86 on: July 04, 2005, 07:31:37 PM »
u cried mira? wow...senstive gurl lol

and help me, i need korean names, guy and gurl -___-

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« Reply #87 on: July 04, 2005, 10:13:24 PM »
erm....minju as a girl name? taejoon as a guy name?

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« Reply #88 on: July 04, 2005, 11:01:12 PM »
huh...wen i say them, they sound good together, thank you very much

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« Reply #89 on: July 05, 2005, 09:00:36 AM »
nice story^^
enjoyed it very much... :D

 

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