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« Reply #15 on: May 19, 2005, 09:26:46 PM »
8O !!omigosHh>.<!!!dis isH soOo sad,aiiiiiiiiiii :'( but itz veriee goOod indeed*nodz*..keep it up^^!!!
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u


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« Reply #16 on: May 20, 2005, 02:11:19 AM »
wow, i'm addicted ^_^
it's awesome

can't wait to read more!

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« Reply #17 on: May 20, 2005, 02:19:32 AM »
oh noooooo mihyun!! dont diee!! TT_TT...sad chapter.

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« Reply #18 on: May 20, 2005, 02:26:37 AM »
hmmmmm i don't think i remember this part in the summary..... so sad..... why do the good guys always get hurt? Anyways, good job jimmy. Post more soon...i'm very anxious lol. :D

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« Reply #19 on: May 21, 2005, 03:24:29 AM »
Sorry, dis chapter is kinda boring, but the next chapter, i'll try to make it more sad more exciting

Chapter 4

HanBin holds a dying MiHyun in his arms. MiHyun’s fathers comes out of the house.

“What happened” he asks

He looks to the right and sees MiHyun

“Oh god…MiHyun!!!” he yells

HanBin looks up and see him

“We got to get her to the hospital quickly!” HanBin says

They pick MiHyun up and puts her in the back with HanBin. The drive took 10 minutes with a dying MiHyun barely holding on to her life. When they arrive, she put on a stretcher. And it is pushed into the hospital. A doctor runs along the stretcher as its being pushed into the ER.

“What happened” the doctor asks

“Nineteen year old girl, she’s been shot in the stomach. She’s losing blood fast and barely has a pulse” the nurse says

“Then we gotta get her into surgery fast” the doctor says

Just then, HanBin comes and runs along the stretcher.

“How is she? Is she gonna be okay?” he asks

One of the nurses stops and stops him.

“I’m sorry, but you can’t go any further” she says

HanBin tries to push out of the way. But two guards comes and holds him back.

“MiHyun! Don’t die, please! MiHyun!” HanBin yells

The stretcher goes through the ER room and the door closes.

*New scene, HanBin and JinHyun are in the waiting room*

“Oh god, MiHyun, please be okay” HanBin cries

JinHyun says nothing, he puts his hands over his faces and looks at the ground…crying.

“How come you’re saying nothing!” HanBin yells “You’re only daughter is in there…dying!” “And you say nothing?”

“There’s…nothing to say, only to hope that she’s alive” JinHyun says

HanBin sighs; he lies against the wall and stares at the ground.

*8 hours later* The Operation ends and the surgeon comes out. HanBin and JinHyun stands up, hoping for good news.

“Is she okay?” they both ask

The surgeon sighs

“Right now, she’s in stable condition” he says

HanBin and JinHyun both are relieved of this news.

“But, there’s a problem” he says

There eyes widen

“What?” HanBin says

“This is a rare problem, since the bullet hit her at the side. The bullet punctured a kidney and then went through to the other. If we don’t have a kidney for her…she won’t…make it through the night. I’m sorry” he says sadly

“What are we gonna do?” JinHyun says “Finding a donor is almost impossible”

“I’ll be the donor, I’m a perfect match for her” HanBin says

“What” JinHyun asks

HanBin shakes his head

“You should really know more about your daughter.” He says “She and I have known each other for so long, we know everything about each. We even know that our bodies can accept each other’s organs.”

“But…how, how do you know all of this” JinHyun asks

“Forgot how I know, just one thing before I do this operation” he looks down, then looks up “I want you to tell MiHyun…that...I, died during the operation.

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« Reply #20 on: May 21, 2005, 09:04:39 AM »
good story . . . you can really write a story . . . maybe one of your stories will be on tv someday . . . keep up the good work . . . question though . . . what is the reasoning behind the driveby . . . who were they after and why? . . .
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« Reply #21 on: May 21, 2005, 03:50:25 PM »
omigosHh... 8O ..datz soOo sad..in sounds almsot like.."Stair Way to heaven" cuz dat one guy tries to die in a car accident but he covers his eyes so da doctorz can giv it to da grl..man..itz gettin soOo sad..bout to crieee>.<~but ur doing realiee great!!keep it up..u shud realliee be a writer..and who knowz?one day..sumone might see dis aand they mgiht actuallii make a movie out of dis..ur awesum broOo :wink:
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u

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« Reply #22 on: May 21, 2005, 05:22:26 PM »
uh huh..sure~*sarcasm look*~..lolz..j/k~~

yahH~ya see jimjim??anywayzz....to lesliee-who shud mihyun..and all da other actor/actresses be...??lolz`
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u

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« Reply #23 on: May 21, 2005, 05:24:10 PM »
BTW!!!dis is al matching..Lesliee can film it..or maybe jsut be one of da main characters since ya wanna be an actor..and guess wut i can be?!?!?!?!I'll sing da OST for dis movie,HahAha~..since im going to try out for a korean singer in few yearz..so yeah~dat'll be soOo awesum!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u

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« Reply #24 on: May 21, 2005, 05:48:12 PM »
Quote from: "i4gotmykookie"
good story . . . you can really write a story . . . maybe one of your stories will be on tv someday . . . keep up the good work . . . question though . . . what is the reasoning behind the driveby . . . who were they after and why? . . .


lol, yeah, i had a feelin somebody will be askin dat question. don't worry, i thought ahead, it might a take a couple of chapters. but the drive-by will be explained in a sad way :wink:

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« Reply #25 on: May 21, 2005, 07:29:40 PM »
Chapter 5

Just now, HanBin says the unthinkable

“What” JinHyun asks

HanBin sighs

“I…decided…I want MiHyun to have a good life” he says “So, I’ll live her”

JinHyun sighs

“I see” he says

“So just…tell her I died, I’m goin to America” HanBin says sadly “I got a uncle there who can give me a job at his company.”

JinHyun walks over to HanBin and puts his hand on JinHyun’s shoulder

“You’re doing the right thing HanBin” JinHyun says

“Which reminds me, your daughters is dying, where is her husband to be?” he asks codly

“He’s…in Seoul, taking care of some business, so he can’t make it” JinHyun says

HanBin turns his head and looks at JinHyun

“What” he yells “How can a husband can’t make it when his future wife on her death bed?”

“You better make sure dis guy takes good care of her” HanBin commands “Or…you’ll be back…and I’ll be looking for you, got that?”

HanBin shoves him to the wall and grabs his collar. JinHyun eyes widen with fright

“…alright, I’ll make sure of it” he says in fear

“Good” HanBin says

He releases his grip

“Now…whats his name?” HanBin asks

JinHyun now tries to catch his breath

“His name is…TaeWon” he says
“I”ll remember that” HanBin says “I’m goin to get read”

He walks away

*20 minutes later*

HanBin comes back in a patient cloths. He hands JinHyun a letter.

“Here, give this to MiHyun, its my last words to her” HanBin says “Please, give it to her”

“All right, I will” JinHyun says

HanBin walks away.

The operation starts and 18 hours past. The operation was a success.

*New Scene, during operation*

JinHyun waits at the waiting room. He puts his hands on his face.

“Dear god…what…have I done” he says sadly

*Flashback*

“You sure you wanna take the money” says a black figure

“Yes, I need the money…to start a business” JinHyun says

“Haha, remember, dis is a loan” says the black figure “You better pay it back”

JinHyun bows

“Thank you, don’t worry, I will” he says

“You better” the black figure says “For if you don’t, you’ll pay, trust me, you’ll pay”

*End of Flashback*

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« Reply #26 on: May 22, 2005, 12:51:21 AM »
8O !!!OmigoSsHh!!!!soOo part of da incident wuz da dad's fault..o.O?!?!man..wutta fuker!!!!!!! :x lolz..otayy..lemme calm mehself down a bit*inhales..exhalez*~otaiii..im okie now..anywyaz..itz gettin veriee interesting indeedd..yupyup*nodz*~~
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u

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« Reply #27 on: May 22, 2005, 01:12:22 AM »
*closes earz*..uh huh..yah yah yah~blah blah~~lalalalalalalla~*still ignorez*~~

HahAha~..sry br0 but u jsut lost it...HmMm..letz jsut say i decided to take him as my man,LMAO!!!!!!! lol lol lol reda my bannerr...MY WONBIN!!muAhaHa~s0 yoOo bk off!!!!!!wonbin's my man now..arGhHh~ :x
wen y0u eat yer happi fer a day
wen y0u get a cellf0ne yer happi fer a week
wen y0u get a new car yer happi fer a m0nth
&wen y0u get a new h0use yer happi fer a year.
but d0 y0u kn0w wut im going t0 d0 t0 be happi all my life?
im g0ing t0 be with y0u

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« Reply #28 on: May 22, 2005, 05:25:01 AM »
hey Jimmy-boy...i havnt read this yet, but i will! I dnt know when u posted it, but i'm glad u finally got 2!

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« Reply #29 on: May 22, 2005, 06:25:21 PM »
wowww!! im sure that at the end, hanbin will end up with mihyun. and she'll see him or somethinq and think that shes dreaming. that stupid black figure!! hes prolly the future husband. :evil: good job on this!!~ update soon :D

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